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Suppressed

Change my clothes?
Done.
Anything for you...

Don't like my friends?
Gone.
See? Now it's just me and you.

Too close to my boss?
New job.
(Well, I needed a change of career)
More local you say?
How sweet.
I know how you like to keep me near.

I know-I've gained a few more pounds..
Tomorrow I shall diet.

Too noisy?
I'll shut up.
You need your peace and quiet.

What else to make you happy?
I don't need to second guess.
Our lives would be so perfect

If I could just breathe less...

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (25)

Good take on it. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

Exce

Bloody send button grrrr, excellent words here πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘»

Brilliant take on the theme! πŸ‘πŸ‘

Brilliant.

Brilliant Leigh πŸ‘β€ love this πŸ‘πŸ’‹

Very very well written - love it. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Cleverly sinister, nice and original too πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ bad love trap πŸ˜”

What's the emotion?

Very clever!✨😘✨

This is great πŸ‘πŸ‘@LeahLovesEC breathless

@LeahLovesEC See @Naaviie post for emotion theme

Somehow, I don't expect you to be quite so accommodating ... ;^}. Lovely to see you again, though! 😘

@VikingHorn No, this piece is the exact opposite to me in every way! And thank you, it's good to be back, albeit intermittently I suspect. Heard you sold the business-hope life good & your shoulders have a reduced load 😌😘

@Fly10 Yes, things are going pretty well now, and calming down some. I hope things are settling out well for you as well!

Superb lovely lady...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

That was, heartfelt I felt like this once, now I can see it expressed in words. Thx :)

I can relate. V nice. J x

Oh wow, powerful! Lived it, in the been there done that, ain't going back! β€πŸ‘πŸ˜³β˜•πŸΆ

Powerful write. Insidious build up just like life. You find you are doing more and more until you are almost absorbed by the other person, and forget to be you. Love it !!!! 🌟✨🌟✨

Touched the right spot!!!!😱😎

@HenryThad Thanks for comment-always more worthwhile when someone can relate 😌

This breaks my heart to read, way to familiar :( but excellent write!❀

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