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At the end of every day
The cracks are starting to show
Instead of being a hummingbird
I transform to a crow

I'm too hunched, aching and weary
For one as young as I
But there are some days when
I just wish I could up and fly

I'd fly away from here
To no specific place
But here I remain, putting together
My pretenders smiling face

When my facade starts breaking
I give in to the tears
But not if anyone's watching
Vulnerable to my fears

I like to hide myself away
I paint on a ragged smile
I laugh and joke the day away
Whilst hurting all the while

I think today will be different
I'll dance out in the rain
Wash away my falsities
And expose my inner pain

I don't think I should hide away
I'll have a big reveal
So the all the world can know
What I have worked to conceal

No one can be there to comfort
Or offer words of advice
If I lock my feelings away
With a ghoulish grip like a vice

So today there was a thunderstorm
And I let the water cleanse me
Whilst being awed by lightning
Striking, beautiful to see

Unleashing my inner beauty
Baring all my scars
I should never have hidden them
They make us who we are

We are who we are because
Of everything we've done
Every battle lost bravely
Every war hard won

I feel naked to your gaze
Before you my soul is laid bare
I don't mind what happens to it
So long as I'm able to care

My reveal is a rebirth
As mascara runs down my cheeks
I can sense it slipping away
It's almost too hard to speak

I kneel there in the flooding street
And allow myself finally,
Wearing my heart upon my sleeve,
As the girl I longed to be

I.Sparrow

IndiaSparrow

@IndiaSparrow

Strange swirling thoughts spin in my head and jump onto paper! 18 years young.

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Comments & Feedback (22)

Sorry it's a bit long... Blame the fact I can't sleep! ;)

@IndiaSparrow long isn't a bad thing 😊

Beautiful

Beautiful hey why not never too long if you've got something to say say it lol 😄 love this can relate well with this piece 😘

Lovely - very haunting.

@MrAlex Are you boasting❕

@MrAlex @ckahn @aleishagayle20 thanks very much! I'd keep that in mind, considering my next poen

*poem seems to be longer! Why does backspace have to be next to send! :P

@TheCodsPollocks thanks, and there is always one who finds the joke in everything XD

@IndiaSparrow awesome lol really doesn't matter my perfect guy is long as well and that's not even finished hahaha

Really good this...I like long!!

@aleishagayle20 I can get a bit carried away sometimes, I shall check out this perfect guy one, has it been posted? ;)

@misslittleDHP haha thanks :D

@IndiaSparrow yeah been posted there's loads was on fire yesterday lol haha like posted about 6/7 maybe more lol hahaha thanks that would be nice just drop a comment and let me know what you think thanks love your stuff 😄

@IndiaSparrow can't believe I wasn't following you lol I've corrected that mistake haha 😄😘

@aleishagayle20 I've finally earned the follow :D that's me happy. Right will check out your verrrrry long poem ;)

Beautiful and a rewarding finish. I'm just waiting for that rain... 😌 x

@TheCodsPollocks rofl! I wouldn't want to comment!

💚💚 great write, love the ending

Just smile and wave, that's what they say. I kind of feel the same way. Easy to relate for most people I think. We all need to put on a mask sometimes, to hide our inner suffering. Very well described. Loved it. Here's a sun to lighten you burden☀

@foxy2178 @naaviie thanks ;D

@DuRoLuRo thank you very much for your kind comments and the sun to brighten my day, and it's very true that we all sometimes put on a mask covering our emotions ;)

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