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Icicle

The rush of blood has faded to a drip,
Formed icicles around my empty heart,
On frozen tears my feet threaten to slip,
Winter long and dark when we are apart.

Beneath a foot of snow my body lies,
All but a frozen corpse I have become,
Frostbite gnaws; I threaten to close my eyes,
By loss of you I'm snow-blind, deaf and dumb.

Light a candle beneath my frozen form,
And melt my heart once more with words of fire,
In your arms I'll shelter from winters storm,
You are the kindling to my desire.

Become a guiding star through winter's night,
Lest love become an icy stalactite.

Irrational_Kimmi

@Irrational_Kimmi

We're all mad here... All work is mine unless otherwise stated. ~ Instagram: @irrational_kimmi ~ Kik: irrational_kimmi #projecthumanity

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Comments & Feedback (12)

Love this. More so that its a sonnet. ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

Love this :)

@eddie12309 thank you! I'm trying to develop my sonnet writing, I enjoy the style. It's all down to you Ed! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Love this kimmi! Very cool (no pun intended lol)

@Irrational_Kimmi aw thank you. The metaphor and argument is there

Arghh pressed send too early. But I suppose its an organic process too as you can develop the basic structure to suit? ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

@sammielee46 @minxyMolly thanks ladies ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’™

@eddie12309 woo I tried to get both metaphor and argument into it, glad it came over. ๐Ÿ˜

@Irrational_Kimmi my pleasure :)

Love this Kimmi ๐Ÿ‘โค๐ŸŒน

@leelee101 thanks Iron Man ๐Ÿ˜˜

Beautifully cold ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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