You hold my hand,
And I navigate across a minefield,
You hold my hand,
And I levitate across the sea.
You hold my hand,
And I reach the summit of a mountain,
I can do anything,
If you are here with me.
I take your hand,
And gain love and understanding,
I take your hand,
And find the strength I lost before.
I take your hand,
And like a flash my life has meaning,
I'll never want for anything,
Forever more.
[Another (edited) old one, from 2003]
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When everyone else told me no, you propped me up and said yes. Despite them saying they knew best. The highs and lows of aspirations get me down. But you always make me smile when you're around.
No words exist to convey my feeling. Towards you girl,my head is reeling. Till you came along I had no idea. Love like this could ever be near. You showed me the man I used to be.
Song lyrics... Can't wait to hear them to music.. Hope you like. Bunts xx If you tell me it's Friday, When I know it's Monday.. Then I'll take it the weekend's tomorrow.
Life is good. Life is grand. But it can deal. A dodgy hand. I can read. The words you write. Close to giving. Up your fight. I know I'm not. Qualified. For my life's not. Too tough a ride.
G iving a heliping hand and U nselfishly putting others first I n times of need and despiration.
Song lyrics... Can't wait to hear them to music.. Hope you like. Bunts xx If you tell me it's Friday, When I know it's Monday.. Then I'll take it the weekend's tomorrow.
Don't blame me that you are not free, I wish beyond wish that you will see, Too much worry and pain, just not the way to be, Please oh please, just be you - listen to me.
You may be miles away. But in my heart you'll always stay. Helping me keep my darkest fears at bay. Promising life won't always feel this way. You listen to me. Help me clear the fog, so I can see.
Really good write this, love it, I don't see any of yours getting this many likes @maisymoo123 maybe you should read more and comment less
@glen thank you glen...and seeing as its top of the day at the moment, I'm guessing it didn't bore a lot of other people either 😂
Aaww kimmi, that's super sweet! Ignore people who comment for the sake of it, at least be constructive if you're gonna bitch 👍
I am not a snotty little kid, year six thanks, just cause you think you can treat me like a baby just cause I'm eleven and your like, not, doesn't mean nothing
@maisymoo123 I never called you that, I said on this app if you have nothing nice to say don't say it looool!!
@maisymoo123 regardless of age, you act like a snotty little kid. I'm treating you like the rude, obnoxious little kid you are. Thanks. You don't have to read/like my poems if you don't like them, and I don't mind genuine, constructive criticism. But you can keep your snide comments for the school playground, thanks.
@maisymoo123 they're right I'm afraid. Coming on to anyone's comments, no matter what the piece, and saying something like 'ok that bored me' is out of order and disrespectful. You're better off just not saying anything, all that's going to do is get people's backs up. 👍
@leelee101 smells like attention seeking to me! 😁 Maybe someone's mummy doesn't love them enough...😂
Well I did say, sorry if it hurt him inside, no need to start a cafuffle now is there, anyway, it's between me and him not everyone
@maisymoo123 you came on my post and posted a rude comment. You started it. I didn't even know you existed until then. And you have no friends on here because you're rude to people. Just go away quietly and stay off my posts unless you have something constructive to say. Or I'll report you. Kthanksbye.
@Irrational_Kimmi mmm just read it. What is wrong with 'em? Trolling posts on a writing app to leave ridiculous comments is not how I'd be spending my time if I was 11! I've had her put 'lol' on one of mine, and when I asked her what there was to 'lol' about, she said I dunno, I just like saying it. ❓❓❓ Sigh........ ❤❤
@chickgamer I know, right? Hypocrite much? And, to add insult to injury, she called me a 'he'! I suppose it's because my profile pic is a guy, but by that logic she is a cat.
@chickgamer @Irrational_Kimmi that jammy is naughty! 😂 I've just read it all. Lets hope a lesson has been learned eh? 👍👍
@leelee101 I thought it was well played tbh! Just desserts. Hopefully she'll think before she posts in future, but I won't hold my breath.
@Irrational_Kimmi I agree, it was well played. I think she realised what she's done, but like you say, no point holding our breath. Ah well... 👍❤😘
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