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Let Me Go

I fall asleep
To melancholy
And drip away
To the unholy

I rise up high
Into my thoughts
And drift away
To stomach knots

An emptiness
Takes over me
And pulls me to
A vacant sea

Tormenting me
In this nightmare
Are ghostly shapes
That only stare

Empty shadows
Showing my past
Once filled with life
That did not last

My only wish
Is to break loose
And to escape
From this abuse

I wish for them
To let me go
And to drop me

D
o
w
n

To the dream

B
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Jamtots

@Jamtots

Hi. KiK: JammyTots

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Comments & Feedback (14)

πŸ‘πŸ‘ great stuff sir. πŸ‘

Awesome πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Love this πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘

Another cracker. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Awesome stuff πŸ˜œπŸ˜„πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŽ‰

Unintentional references to Never Let Me Go by Florence and the Machine? Still a beautiful write.

@Nom I don't know, I've never heard that song.

@Jamtots it's a good song. I think it was the title and the references to the sea I noticed.

@Nom Oh :s Completely unintentional 😁

Love this mate, nice oneπŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œ

@Jamtots don't worry I didn't think you'd nicked it, just thought it may have been inspiration!

Fantastic.

@PurpleKel87 thank you <3

@Jamtots you're very welcome.

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