M oon in the sky like a pizza pie.
E verything in place like a puzzle.
T ogether real tight like we were ply.
A lmost no sound, like a muzzle.
P ossibilities are endless, like infinity.
H oly and not friendless like a trinity.
O r solid like concrete, hard as nails.
R eady and complete, like a sale £.
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Just me trying to learn metaphors, probably got it wrong lol but was fun trying. (-:
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A fun write😊 If you're actually bothered a metaphor is where you say something is something. E.G: She had a heart of gold. A simile is saying comparing something to something. E.g: she had a heart like gold. I like it all the same👍
@Blueblotts yeah I thought I misunderstood slightly😓 I might take it down and work on it. Thanks for the help👍
@leelee101 @Emily_InspiresAll @tetti2 @sammielee46 I added question marks to it lol, it was fun none the less, thanks for the comments👍🎁💝
@sleepydragon Thank you very much, I might try another at some point but properly. It gave me a bit of a headache as it was though lol Thanks for the comment🎁💜😊
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