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Suicide isn't painless

How do we manage to get here ?
to that stage of no return,
can't see through the clouds of despair and doubt,
when we crave for love- we yearn..

for someone to take away all the years of doubt,
that lay dormant in our minds,
where sanity sees no solution,
to the tangled knots we can't find.

It's a cry for help, can't they see that?
isn't it plain for them all to see?
tortured , and lost who they are,
need help, they need to feel free.

Suicide isn't painless,
to control the end of their life,
they can't forget all those they'll leave behind,
their someone's daughter,mother,lover or wife.

So where do they start to heal their pain?
and all the hurt that they need to mend,
they have to start to learn how to love themselves,
or this circle, will never end.

Suicide isn't painless,
it's not the answer to bottle it all up inside,
you have to learn to release your emotions, and finally start to confide.

Your life is so much more, if you can share it,
don't be selfish, you're never alone,
when depression starts to raise it's head,
be responsible, and pick up your phone.

Tiia

@Tiia

Hi fellow Opussians ! I am a published poet having been writing since I was 16. Having had poetry published in poetry anthologies. My life has been too busy to say the least over the last 6 years and so my son Daniel Hing a Ling has persuaded me to put pen to paper and start writing again and join in on the Opussian way of life!

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Comments & Feedback (7)

Powerfull and very true! Great write ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

I could turn this into a song @tiia

Excellent ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

A really powerful message! Superb! Xx

@HingAling24 it's already a song title from the TV programme M.A.S.H.

Difficult subject. Well executed.

I only wish my cousins husband saw this last year...he left behind his wife and 3 kids reeling...as they never knew why....this is a superb and powerful write about a thing that's touched my life too many times โœจ๐Ÿ’”โœจ๐Ÿ’”โœจ๐Ÿ’”โœจ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

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