I may not be very good
But words are in my blood
The key word here is "my"
Meaning all my own -
No need to question why?
But please do tell
Where I'm going wrong
It might make me better
Make me strong
For most of the critics
Just say about good
Be constructive
Just like I know you could
I'll take it on the chin
In the hope I'll be better again.
And keep on writing everyday
In the hope of being No.1.
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Comments & Feedback (19)
Nick I just read 'Just Words' again, you're asking for help to make yourself better and some constructiveness. I've followed you for a whole now and have read enough to know you don't need help to get better, you're plenty good enough. As for constructiveness, here's how I see it. Pick a theme, topic, subject and just write it down. No negatives, just stick with the positives and just go with it. See where it takes you. And then post it, no matter how bad/good you think it is. You know how supportive this community can be so just let your writing do all the work for you. I for one will look forward to what you come up with. You may choose to take this on board or not, it's just the way I see it, no offence intended. Go, Nick go! ππ
@Toulbox totally agree with the lovely @leelee101 ...right from the heart and head...see where it takes you...besides you are doing great as it isππππ
@Toulbox no worries mate grate words and @leelee101 yes I would of done ha der dum der dum that's supposed to be the jaws music lol
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