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Skin Of Snow White

Mirror mirror on the wall
Who will win and who will fall?
What if the tale was to change
Into something bleak and strange?
The one of the girl with skin like snow
This is how the darker fairytale would go

Firstly her name is not snow white, this girl is something more dark then light
With lips that were stained red with blood, nothing about this princess was good
Her skin may have been white as snow, but inked patterns on snow cold skin were really on show
Her ebony black hair coloured by deaths hand, but still the fairest in the land
Eyes darker then onyx yet still with a shimmer, fairest of them all and still a faint glimmer

First they used a witch with a poisoned brush, but a feeble attempt it just gave her an erotic rush
A simple pretty ribbon they thought would tempt, as she clawed out there eyes no one exempt
Finally just like eve tempted with the apple, thought they could exorcise her demons and lock her in a chapel
She ate the apple which was poisoned inside, not sure what happened so they said she died

Talked of her laying in a golden casket, seven little deadly sins brought and left in a basket
They talk of a prince who came to look, her story never ended anything like the book
He didn't come and fall for her cursed beauty in love, he came and tried to claim her as if sent from above
Yet unable to appreciate the darker side, he went and took another fairer princess as his bride

Awoke in a vengeance after a life so cruel, a now rising demon a precious jewel
Seeming so innocent pure and kind, no one would have guessed she had lost her mind
She took to the forest to gain new evil friends, across the kingdom her evil she sends
Gnomes gremlins goblins and all, she relished at the thought of there demonic fall
She became the evil fairy queen and goddess in there sight, only coming out to play in the darkest night
Step-mum was the first to go, the prince soon too will know, watch out for the girl with skin as white as snow.

This story I am sending to show there is no such thing as a happy ending.

aleishagayle20

@aleishagayle20

They call me Mistress and Priestess but I'm just me young crazy and free!

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Much more interesting than the original! Love it 😽

@sjw Thank you very much I prefer my adaptation

*more gothic haha thank you for the comment.

@sjw Thank you I agree I prefer my adaptation more dark and gothic. Thanks for the comment.

Excellent!

@waynedoz Thank you 😊

@aleishagayle20 challenge whipped! Well done hun 😊😘

@leelee101 Thanks 😊 glad you enjoyed hun and thanks for the repost 😘

@Naaviie Thanks for the repost hun 😘

Brilliant 😊 challenge well and truly accomplished mistress 😉😘

@Delilah Thank you hunny and thanks for the repost 😘

@aleishagayle20 challenge completed top marks 👍

@TheViolator Hehe thank you babe 😊

@aleishagayle20 no problemo 😉

@Delilah 😘

@aleishagayle20 my pleasure

@naaviie 😘

@aleishagayle20 omg. Loving this snow white. She is crazy😄

@DuRoLuRo haha thank you I like her as well she's a much better version haha 😘

@aleishagayle20 Fantastic version!

Thanks @jojo72 😊

@aleishagayle20 brilliant babes 😃

@smellyfingers Thank you glad you like 😘 better give me yours soon 😉

@smellyfingers ps thanks for repost 😘

@Kivihe thanks for repost

@aleishagayle20 wow! Love it!

Ab fab...bloody cracking....really enjoyed that....I think Ladybird should do a set of new modern classics and use our stuff...lol....xxxx

@misslittleDHP haha agree our stuff licks ass 😜

@becominghuman 😘 thanks

Great!

@sb2uk Thanks 😘

That's awesome! Little bit depressing, but I like it!

@kilico1 depressing? Ha! Okay your entitled to your opinion thank you for the comment 😊

Amazing! :)

@musicalmissy Thank you darling 😄

No offence meant at all! We are all different! ☺

Love it :)

@kilico1 I know just making mine heard lol thank you for your comment 😊

@Nom glad thanks hun 😄

@aleishagayle20 I love your poems. Great work!

@Jatt Thank you 😊

@aleishagayle20 Epically Brilliant!

@Weirdwolf Thank you hottie 😘

That's good but weird ?! I do like it but .... I like it !?

@jactheninja hahaha thanks hun 😉😘

@NamesKill thanks for the repost 😘😘

@aleishagayle20 You're very welcome! 😊

@NamesKill 😘😘

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