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Transcendent Pause

Let me whisper in your ear my dear
of things that oft transpire
when shadows long and toads do song and stars begin to fire.

The space between the here and there
when stillness does descend.
That space to lay your weary head and there's nothing to defend.

Shhh, now. Take a breath, close your eyes for time stands unmoving.
The peaceful twilight
has come to birth, it's gentle power proving.

Come ponder with me amid this calm and listen to crickets sing.
A staccato crescendo heralds the night on a thousand tiny wings.

Savor this moment, an eternity,
where souls go a-roaming
Gone too quick, transcendent pause.
For fleeting is the gloaming.

ckahn

@ckahn

A girl.

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Comments & Feedback (27)

This is really lovely, nicely written💗😊

I love this, it's so tranquil, well done! 😽

@Stablish @crowncottage thank you both 😊 @Stablish thanks for the RP! 😘💐

My pleasure😘🌺

@crowncottage oh! You too! Thank you for the RP. I'm glad you liked it. The gloaming is my favorite time of day🌸💗🌸

@ckahn mine too!

This is such a beautifully written piece. One with so much thought and heart. 😌

Nice and peaceful. Like it 👍😘

Magic 💚✨

I love this, very well written and imagery. 😘

Ooooh lovely lovely 😄

Serene & beautifully written my friend😌😚

This is beautifully stunning...really beautifully written!...loved it💜💜

Truly lovely. And the poem's nice, too.

@milkeyedmender @leelee101 @naaviie @naaviie @smellyfingers @powpunch @Fly10 @misslittleDHP thank you everyone for all your kind words and support! 😘💐 I seem to get really positive feedback from my pieces that evoke a sense of calm so I think I'm going to try and do more of those for the practice. Thank you for all the reposts! 💐😘💐

You've captured the sense of tranquil so beautifully....love it

This was lovely! Really great writing 😉

@natalee thank you! Glad you liked it.💗

@ckahn lovely stuff 🐒💨☕☕☕☕☕😃

@glen thank you my monkey man 😘 and thanks for the reposts! 💐

@ckahn are you ever going to read that story I wrote for you lol 😜🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧

@glen oh! Had you told me you wrote it?! I have a brain like a sieve I swear! I'm on it😊

@ckahn I forgive you lol I did change it quite a bit hope it's ok

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@RichWithey oh wow. Thank you. That means a lot to me. I've missed your presence here. Glad to have you back. Got a friend to download you today on Ether just under the wire. 😘💗😘

Oh! Thanks for the RP my friend☺💐💐

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@RichWithey good luck! Either way, you're a star to me 😊🌟

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