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cold

. Your like ice,
Penetrating my skin;
Crystalline daggers,
Killing from within.

<Pierce.
<Perforate.
< Tear me apart.

Slice>
Shred>
Break my heart>

<Cut.
<Cruelly.
<You freeze the soul.

Take>
Tear>
My body whole>

The blackest of ice,
I stumble and fall;
The coldest of hearts,
At your beck and call.

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Only fictional😊

@eddie12309 lovely probably shouldn't b used here! But I did like this :) :)

@NDunners why?

Love this and the format really works well 👏😘

@sjw aw thanks I wasn't sure if it would. 😘

Great write @eddie12309 👏👏

@Stablish thankyou 😘

Fabbo Hun 👏✨👏✨👏✨👏✨👏✨👏

@eddie12309 because I think it is too deep to just be lovely :)

@NDunners ah I see. I thought you meant my poem shouldn't be used here. 😂

@eddie12309 oh god no! Sorry for the confusion! 😊

Lovely stuff hun 👏👏☕❤

Wow. This is magnificent.

@leelee101 @paintingskies thank you both. 😊

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