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Crumpled

Compounded with the musky aroma of 'I don't care'

Smudged black mascara on her amber eyes
Hides the truth and her troubled lies

How many more will it take to forget
Years of abuse, tears and torment

Just like her clothes she has crumpled inside
Living on the outside but the contents have long since died

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Poignant pieceπŸŒŸπŸ’—πŸŒŸ

Cor heavy πŸ˜₯ πŸ’great words

@ckahn @tetti2 thank you. Heavy yes but also how you interpret certain words in it. πŸ’šπŸ˜Œ

Emotive write Hun πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

@misslittleDHP @Irrational_Kimmi thank you both for the reposts. πŸ’š

@sarahgamal 😘 for the repost

@eddie12309 my pleasure 😊

Brilliant hunny. πŸ‘πŸ‘ good morning β˜•β€

Great stuff πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 @minxyMolly thank you πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸ‘

Cool✌

@prettyboy13579 thankyou πŸ‘

@Jamtots @sjw cheers both for the reposts. πŸ‘πŸ’š

Awesome

These words told the story of my ex....she broke my heart with her tales of woe

@patdolan83 I'm sorry to hear that. Hopefully your writing will allow you to deal with the pain. πŸ˜žπŸ’š

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