Chapter 1
A strange noise was coming up behind us "watch out!!" Riley jumped and knocked me out of the way a strange creature ran straight past us right where I was standing if it wasn't for Riley I'd be mince meat "what was that?" I ask in a panicked voice, Riley just shrugs and says in a quite calm but puffed voice "I don't know but I think we should get out of here before it comes back or something else try's to attack us". We keep on walking when he stops very suddenly and turned to look at me but he looked straight at my feet and said "I think you might want to take them off" pointing to my high heels then looking at the direction we were heading I decided it was probably a good idea. As we walked it got mushier and mushier until we were knee deep in "SLIME!!" I screamed as we scwelched through the hideous green goo. It was getting really deep almost up to our waists when "did you see that?" Riley asks me pointing in the direction he saw something
"no" I replied in a confused manor "what was it?" I ask
"I don't know it look like some sort of hooded figure"
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It's very good, well done. I am reposting it but please add the letter e onto slime as it's very distracting! 😄👏👏
@hanisius me too, I just wanted you to correct it. Do you know you can edit? There is a little pencil icon on the bottom right I think! 😊
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