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Simple-Apology

Wrong
Strong
Bong
Long

Feel
Real
Seal
Deal

Now I too deserve some charity
A well written poem with this transparency

And as I've been advised by those benched above

This may now be creative enough for their love

Cause all written word expressed here is equal

As shown by the Wise, perched high in their steeple.

No judgement cast here!
None of that is allowed!
We judge you for judging!
Judges, the non-judging crowd.

But the thing about judging that all judges do

Is cry about judging, whilst judging you

So I apologize not, for not finding guilt

With all of the other glass houses being built.

jessep15

@jessep15

Someone.

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Comments & Feedback (28)

Thing is.. I ain't judging you. I just don't agree with you. I mentioned glass houses because you seemed to be criticising pieces you thought of as below par.. I am not doing that, I'm simply saying there's room for many levels of talent and methods of written expression, so I'll stay away from those pesky houses of glass.. However, there remains an element of truth in this piece πŸ‘

We judge you for judging, judges the non-judging crowd.. Nice line.. I may have to steal that πŸ˜‚

This amuses me lol well written tho

To me when reading this and this is my own interpretation from your poem is that are you saying all those who criticise (and you're falling under that description with your posts) that we are playing at being high and mighty?!

@minxyMolly when you bring it to its basest level we all judge whenever we leave a comment. It all comes down to the tone and interpretation of the comment. @jessep15 clever stuff. And fair do's too. This should end the matter. πŸ‘πŸ‘ points of view are all different, just depends how we air them, I suppose πŸ‘

@leelee101 pretty much, you can't go through life without judging or being judged. But like you said hopefully this'll be the last post on the matter x

@leelee101 @minxyMolly hey, I only just put my pink boxing gloves back on...ding ding

@leelee101 @minxyMolly yeah.. Surely it must be time to post about plagiarism again πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚ the same favourite topics of debate will never go away (IMHOBINW... In My Humble Opinion But I'm Never Wrong πŸ˜‰)

@Burrfoot πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ it must be! That or Instagram cheaters! But that was after the plagiarism.....

@jackalice πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠI'll put my red ones on, I like the traditional colour πŸ˜ƒ

@minxyMolly @jackalice mine are purple πŸ˜‚πŸ‘

@Burrfoot plagiarism? Why?

@leelee101 @Burrfoot it's that or multiple accounts for multiple likes lol @Burrfoot your right it seems a circle of debates lol

@leelee101 just one out of many that will keep popping up

@minxyMolly @Burrfoot I must be missing something - what's plagiarism got to do with the jessep15 thing?

@leelee101 @minxyMolly @Burrfoot yeah, but I like the ol' loins yanked from time to time, especially when I have finally got them (they are very big) into this fetching pink leotard

@jackalice πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ‘ yep lol

@jackalice mind you I don't have the same problem, only cuz I stopped wearing a leotard now days, it got uncomfortable after a while.

@jessep15 when I read what you are saying all I can see is that you are preaching/attacking yourself over bullshit

@minxyMolly I wrote initially towards my noticing of a lot of great original thought with seemingly no recognition ( in the forms of "likes").... But instead I constantly see... Well... The opposite. That Opuss of mine caused a mild attack on me... And my "mediocre" poetry. What you read was in response.

@leelee101 πŸ˜‚ nothing to do with plagiarism.. The quotes/tweets/fb debate is just one of the many that keep surfacing

@jessep15 I read it and have to agree with the guys.

@jessep15 a mild attack? A brilliantly constructed barrage of glass shells , which if you take a look, are filled with delicious ripe words (including yours) Jack And The Poetry Glass Stalks is my next masterpiece..,,

@Burrfoot got it. Thank you. πŸ‘

@leelee101 I agree and Thank you.

I'm done

@jackalice LOL. Indeed.

@jessep15 πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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