I bought you flowers. They're in the bin
Since when was 'happy' a mortal sin
What about 'nice', and where is your smile?
Haven't seen them around here for a while
Perhaps it's the sex. Perhaps it's not
What once was cool is now not so hot
Test this relationship, out with your friends
You don't seem to care if it breaks or just bends
Take it for granted that I'll be around
Stabbing the pain with a needle I've found
I know you're not planning on staying too long
Now we're not even friends, and that's just wrong
Everyone knew it, back at the start
Nothing can soften your concrete heart
Our time is done. We are apart
A blessed release, and A Fresh Start...
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Wow man, that was heavy shit!! Incredibly well rhymed and easily read. Top notch Lee. ππππ
@misslittleDHP thank u my lovely β€ On the subject of #augustwriteaday, I find it amazing how a word or two can inspire π Thank you for reposting sweetness β€π By the way, have you dried off? πππ
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