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Eight Days

A truce a peace
Some sweet release
The blood on their hands
Will drip dry
And drain through the sands
Of this ancient land
Terror and fear
Are the rulers here
This time eight days
Next time a year
A temporary end to violence
A strange and uneasy silence
It seems hard to understand
Why the fight for this small piece of land
And while there's peace this very night
Both sides would claim a birthright
And this latest chapter of holy war
Is finished for now
But how long for?

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Yeah for how long?😢 Excellent write Lee 👏👏👏

Big question! Fab write!

I doubt it will last the weekend, the media will probably tell us Hamas has fired a couple of 'rockets' at Jerusalem and the IDF will say: "they are the aggressors, see!", and the fragile illusion of hope for the Palestinians will be shattered by a hail of Israeli missiles. I could be wrong. Great write Sir and an incredibly relevant question 😃👍👏👏🐷🍞☕

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Agree with @Weirdwolf and I'd like to know what the Americans threatened Egypt with! Great write 👏

@Weirdwolf thanks mate. I caught it on the news this morning, and it's only really a matter of time isn't it, poor bastards. 😢😢😢 Thanks for the RP sir 👍🐷🍞☕

@sjw my mum's home cooking. That'll stop anything 😂 Thanks for reposting sweety 👍❤🌹

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for reposting hunnybunch™ 👍❤🌹

@RichWithey thank u Rich 👍 repost beers, natch 🍻🍻🍻

@sammielee46 thanks for reposting Sam 👍❤🌹

@minxyMolly Isn't it? Thanks MM ❤ and for the RP too hun 👍🌹

@leelee101 😘

@sarahgamal thank you Sarah. All quiet for now eh? Hope it lasts. 👍 Thanks for the RP sweety 👍❤🌹

I'm starting to worry about my holiday I booked to the Gaza Strip. Great write mate 👌

@glen I'd cancel mate. 😂 Cheers for the RP sir 👍🍻🍻🍻👏

@TheGoldRibbon appreciate that RP ❤ thank you 👍🌹

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It's like déjà vu, there will never be peace certainly not in my lifetime. 😔

@eddie12309 agreed. Too sad 😢☕

@misslittleDHP 😢😢😢 thanks for the RP Kim 👍❤🌹

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