Friday Fun (Feb. 22)

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Traces of me lay bare
Elevated, unaware
Empirical nuances - filter through
You rarely notice, it's cruel
By @yikici

You've grown immune to my needs
Watching as destruction plants its seed.
Warmth has gone
I should have known all along.
By @sjw

Love has wilted from your face
I stand alone in the halls of our embrace
There was a time, there was a place
But now I fall...from grace...
By @RichWithey

And as I search for what I've lost
Your name is on my heart, embossed
It's burning deep a blackened hole
Through which escapes my tortured soul...

Contributors:
@yikici
@sjw
@RichWithey
@leelee101

Proposed contributor:
@SoppyStabby oops sorry, @Stablish

As per the rules, if you feel your verse nicely finishes the piece, then please conjure a suitable title and post accordingly.

#collaborative-poetry #emotional-verse #fridayfun #general #heartbreak #relationship-breakdown

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Comments & Feedback (24)

Feb 22, 2013 at 4:44 PM

@yikici @sjw @RichWithey @Stablish

Feb 22, 2013 at 4:46 PM

Oooo a touch of panache -nicely done. 😘✨

Feb 22, 2013 at 4:48 PM

Can you add the rule about the contributor who finishes the piece needs to give the piece a worthy title -and ensure the next contributor @Stablish filters that through too in his post. 😘💐✨

Feb 22, 2013 at 4:52 PM

Pretty please I should have added to that. 😝💐✨

Feb 22, 2013 at 4:57 PM

Great stuff, lee lee, looks like I've found what to do with the last of my phone battery. @yikici I shall do my best to please 👍👍

Feb 22, 2013 at 4:58 PM

@Stablish lol -looking forward to it. 😘✨

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:06 PM

@yikici will do 👍❤😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:09 PM

@Stablish you need to add the ending rule to your piece mate. Check mine or @yikici's for said rule 👍👍🍻

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:10 PM

@sarahgamal thanks for reposting hun 👍❤ you may be tagged sweety, be ready! 😘😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:11 PM

@Stablish @yikici @RichWithey thanks y'all for the rp's 👍👍👍❤

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:11 PM

@leelee101 nah will pass😊

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:12 PM

@sarahgamal fair enough sweetheart 😘😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:13 PM

@yikici Panache, eh? Thanks hun 👍❤😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:15 PM

No, thank you 😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:15 PM

Great adding the rule -thank you. 💐✨

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:19 PM

@yikici totally welcome! 😘😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:19 PM

@BethyBoo thanks for reposting hunny 👍❤😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:26 PM

Excellent! I'm loving this Friday fun 👏👏👏😘🍻

Feb 22, 2013 at 5:35 PM

@sjw thanks sweety 👍 Been fun, no? ❤❤ Thanks for reposting too 🌺🌺🌺 more Friday flowers for you Missy™ 😘

Feb 22, 2013 at 6:14 PM

Friday flowers too this day keeps getting better thank you😘 it was great fun ❤🍻

Feb 22, 2013 at 6:37 PM

@sammielee46 thanks for the lovely RP sweety 👍❤

Feb 22, 2013 at 7:12 PM

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Feb 22, 2013 at 9:31 PM

@patdolan83 thanks for the RP mate 👍🍻

Feb 22, 2013 at 9:36 PM

@RichWithey aw really? Out the park? Cheers amigo that's much appreciated 👏👏🍻

Mar 15, 2013 at 3:53 AM

@Stablish did you complete this piece? If so can you please tag me into it as I can't find it in the FridayFun feed. 😘✨

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