I'm not finished
Not quite yet
Will you come
Will you not
Get wet with me
It's still hot...
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Comments & Feedback (50)
What is the #nightdwellers? Is it just what you write if you can't sleep ๐ sorry I sound so dumb right now
@oushie12 haha! You're not dumb it's just a tag that a few Opusseers came up with cos they do a lot of their stuff during the wee small hours. It's not exclusive, so if you post at night, you can tag it #nightdwellers if you like ๐๐
@HeatherAnne thank u princess and ๐ for the repost. And thank u hunny for that kind message. Let's see what I can do... ๐๐โค๐๐
@leelee101 Awww ๐ don't mind, it was mostly just taken down in respect of my younger day time readers... Just wrote them to try out nightdwellers and hienz. ๐
@leelee101 ๐ well I wasn't sure if it fit the Heinz tag that's why I asked you to read but @naaviie said it was Eddies tag ๐
@leelee101 haha I tried but I don't know about awesome... ๐ I'll send it to Norman for a verdict...
@naaviie ๐๐ I'll think about it.... I think I have a few younger readers and don't want to corrupt their innocent minds ๐ who's is the ketchup tag?
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