A heart is a fragile thing
More delicate than a butterfly wing
It can be light and float like a feather
Or heavy and under the weather
It rhythmically beats like tribal drums
Or hypnotically fast like firefly hums
It's tender and needs handling with care
As its a thing to behold and share
A heart starts off trusting and pure
Wanting to be loved and so much more
It should not be ignored and left to beat away
It needs love and cherishing, so the beat shall stay
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Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.
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Great piece and so true! I see how devastating neglect can be to a child's development way too often. 💐💗💐
@ckahn I was watching a programme about organ donation last night..really hit me...as a close friend is deeply upset after losing a friend due to a damaged liver...got me thinking about how so precious our heart is...indeed whilst we are alive and in death..the heart is so precious in many ways, it needs nurturing and treated only with love....a bit deep I know...but just writing what I'm feeling...THANKYOU lovely lady for you kind comments...and indeed the repost hun💓💓💓💓💓
@nikujagagirl I wouldn't know where to begin to get something published...when I was 15... I entered a short story comp...was a runner up and won a set of Parker pens...my gramp was much more excited than I was lol....😂😂😂😂😂
Love it, great poem. Hearts need looking after from more than just fatty foods. They need some loving too.❤
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