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Tendernisation

Before you
I was feral, wild and free

Then you came
You were tender to me

I was hard
A tough nut to crack

With you
All defences fell flat

I never wanted
To be loved so much

With you
I surrender to your touch

Inner chains
Had held me for so long

All feelings
Just felt so very wrong

It became
A way of life for me

Until you
I wanted to be free

I looked at you
Something stirred deep inside

Something I feared
Had long since died

For once
I wanted to be held

My eyes
Tears began to well

Confusion set in
What were you doing to me?

Was this real
Or some cruel trickery?

Just when
I was about to turn and run

You held me
Something beautiful had begun

All my fears
Turned to a golden dust

In you
I found love and deep trust

Before you
I was feral, wild and free

Then you
Showed tenderness to me

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (42)

@minxyMolly...mwah my lovely for the repost😘😘😘

No problem lovely piece ☺💗💜😘

@misslittleDHP brill. Part 8 of thelight is out.

Beautiful 😊😚

That's a corker my lovely. Well done 👍❤😍😝👏

@eyes5ib @MrsS @leelee101 thankayoooo you gorgeous people...😍😍😍😍

Beautiful...

Just lovely, so well written to ☺😘👏👏👏❤

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@chy 😍😍😍😍😍

@misslittleDHP very welcome Hun 😘

Great write! 👏👏💐💐

Beautiful piece sweetpea😘

Amazing writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is beautiful and so tender 💐❤💋

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@magicmilkshake @nikujagagirl @sjw THANKYOU all you gorgeous peeps for the reposts...flowers for all...🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

@misslittleDHP Anytime! :)

@misslittleDHP You're very welcome! :)

@ponyo...thanks my sweet for the kind repost 💗💚💗💚💗

@naaviie...thanks my sweet for the lovely repost💘✨💘✨💘✨

It's alright :') it was beautiful ❤

Wanted to say earlier but was in a rush, have read this over many times now, couldn't think of the right words to praise it, all I can say is that it touched my heart! 💙💜💚❤ times like these when, yet again, I wish we had a favourites archive!

@naaviie bless you my darling...I'm truly touched by your praise...that means a lot to me...thanks my sweet...share a drink and some chocs with me 🍸🍸🍸🍸💝💝

Oooh excellent 😍💝🍸✨

@misslittleDHP Lucky guy

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@misslittleDHP any time! 💝😉😜

Your welcome! 😘 I loved this! 😉

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