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Human

I heard the shout again.

Illegible but.... Human.

Definitely human.

My mind buzzed, I felt my jaw drop at the thought.

But I was alone, my head said, no one else survived the plane crash...
I buried each one myself...

It was Day 56, and more. I'd stopped counting, because that was the end; there was no one else but me.

But there he was - slipping from the trees on to the golden sands. Bare foot, spear in hand, copper skin laced in tattoos, muscles rippled across his bare chest.

Large, dark eyes met mine before casting his gaze down to my feet and back. Suddenly I felt self-conscious in my torn rags, sweat-soaked and grim, my underwear clearly on show.

An uncontrollable hand flew up to feel my knotted hair, once smooth, long, curled... Now bunched, salt-crusted and sun-bleached.

He took a step forward. The intimidating intensity on his face made me step back.

He stops, face softening a little. Confusion? I frown.

"Who are you?"

His face mimics mine, replying in words I don't understand.

He reaches out a flat palm to me. Rough, dark skinned and inked with swirls.

I walk forward, on impulse, place my hand in his. For a moment, I feel the heat of his sun-kissed skin as his fingers close tight around mine.

And then he turns, runs - dragging me into the trees...

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Ooooo....good intriguing stuff hunny, keep going! πŸ‘β€πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

Brill stuff Nicola! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸŒ»πŸŒ»

Great piece πŸ‘

@leelee101 @TheCodsPollocks @Shaloo - ahhh thank you, will see where it goes πŸ’šπŸ˜˜πŸŒΉβœ¨πŸ˜

Oooo this is good .... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

@eddie12309 oh thank you πŸ’šβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβœ¨

And then what.....πŸ˜±πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ’šπŸ˜œπŸ˜˜βœ¨

@naaviie Wah, this is great!!! But I'm greedy, I want more already! πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ‘πŸ‘

Tag me @naaviie for the next piece. This just brilliantπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜

Ohhh! Make him a hot stud!πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

@Irrational_Kimmi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ ok I'll work on it for tomorrow πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

@16Moonlight - sure ok, this is the second part! I'll tag them all #island just in case πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@ckahn - mwah we shall see πŸ’šπŸ˜œπŸ˜˜βœ¨

I'd like to see more of this! Brilliant!❀❀❀

You should enter this into the #emotion challenge too! Great write

@Klaire - this is the second part and more is coming! ☺☺

@Nom - thanks!! Who's judging?

@naaviie Great!!!!!❀❀❀

@Klaire - thanks sweetie!! ☺☺☺

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘very good! I hope there's more to come!

@lonelynutmeg98 - there certainly is 😁😁

@naaviie yay!

Please do another!!!

@naaviie it was @Splashdown, the word was confusion. But you've missed it now...

@izzysitv - stay tuned... Out tomorrow 😜

@Nom ah well, I'm not that bothered!

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