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Murder

Red wine has trickled away down thirst-bitten throats
while curling,
blackening,
corners sparkle in the fire; the rejected passions of a lover's notes,

The mirror-skin of water turns to ice, melting at the edges
as a pale,
dying,
sun peaks above manicured, over-worked hedges,

Blue-chested peacocks cry out in fox-induced panic,
before twisted,
blackened,
roots crumble under the forgotten touch, so satanic,

Empty veins signalled by a blood-soaked dress,
glistening,
crimson,
the relief of a heart, a soul, held in love's duress,

The empty wine bottle stands lonely, green and still,
surrounded by
glittering,
cut crystal, more beautiful in death than when full,

Post-fury silence falls as an unwoven tapestry, while
eyes shine,
glowing,
hardening in the afterlife beneath a new galaxy,

Long, white fingers of Death caress the murdered soul,
its pearl surface
cracking,
Yet the kindness of Death holds its torment,
Holding firm to keep it whole.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (13)

Love it❤🌹❤

Bloody hell! 👏👏👏 where did that come from? It's brilliant Nic👍❤😘🌹

This is amazing. Brilliant write. 👏👏👏👏

@ashhkat @eddie12309 - ooh thank you very much ☺☺

@leelee101 - A bad day is clearly good for writing 😝💚😘

@naaviie I shall not pry 😢

@leelee101 - don't worry, just lots of little things 💚💚💚

Superb write...love it ❤❤❤❤❤

@naaviie ❤❤❤

@misslittleDHP - thank you Kim 💚💚💚💚

You is one scary woman......me loves it babe 😜😍😘💋👏👏

@smellyfingers haha thank you 💚😘✨

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@RichWithey - two awesomes! Wow! Thanks Rich 💚😘✨

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