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I know, deep down somewhere around my toes, that I am second best.

I ache with the knowledge of not being good enough. It breaks my heart to think of the world that will never be, the world that will never know of the unison between our hearts, or lips.

A tender caress of my neck, and I knew, I knew I could love you.

But as I ask the fatal question, "Who were you with?" and watch guilt flicker across your face.

My toes know, and jealousy kills what love once sought. I am not first in your heart, and with a heavy weight pressing down on me, I realise - you are second in mine.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ I like it simple but sums it up perfectly! πŸ’—πŸ˜˜

Beautifully sad 😒😞 cx

I love this, short but succinct and beautifully described πŸ˜ŠπŸ’œπŸ’—πŸ’œ

Awww β€β€β€πŸ˜’πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

@sjw @MrsS @Irrational_Kimmi @leelee101 - thank you! πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

This is a fabulossa write...really felt the loss of being second best....πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@misslittleDHP - thank you Kim, glad it came across ☺ had to draw on past experiences. πŸ’šπŸ°πŸΈβœ¨

@naaviie amazing

@nala416 - thank you! πŸ’š

Beautiful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Found it a bit f the post itself is second in "top of the day". Again, sad, but beautiful πŸ’š

Ironic*

@niixxz πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ thanks! And yeh, I kinda love that! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@naaviie Very special write! It is avert deep issue, feeling second best. I think a lot of children feel this way too!!! 🌟✨🌟✨

Sorry! Auto corrected! Meant say, it is a very deep issue.. 🌟✨🌟

@sleepydragon - yeh it is a feeling that plagued me a lot when younger with parents divorcing, and then later with partners cheating... I guess I learnt the hard way that I have to put myself first instead of waiting for someone else to do it for me! Appreciate your comment Diana β˜ΊπŸ’šβœ¨πŸ’šβœ¨πŸ’š

Very powerful.sorry.

@cirrus147 don't worry it is a long time ago!

Oh dear

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