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Should Have Listened

Should have really listened when you said I can't
Instead I was busy holding your hand

Should have really listened when you said not now
Instead I was busy reversing your frown

Should have really listened when you said maybe
Instead I was really busy imagining me your lady

Should have really listened when you said not tonight
Instead I was really busy holding you tight

Should have really listened when you said goodbye
Instead I was busy trying to keep my eyes dry

sarahgamal

@sarahgamal

A 32 mother of 2 .

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Awe, I can feel the heartache in this one💔

Great write, a reply might be in order when I find some time at work😘

Aww.. 😢 Sarah it's lovely. But is that imaging or imagining? No Pssst because both kinda work. 👍❤😘😘

@Stablish heartache really really sucks. Thank you and awaiting the reply 😘

@leelee101 no I meant imagining but was writing quickly I guess😊 thanks for rp 😘

@BethyBoo thanks for rp 😘

@evilfingerz thanks for rp 😘

@sammielee46 taking this chance to thank you for all your kind rps. I realize I suck at thanking for rps but really appreciated 😘😘❤

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@RichWithey thanks Rich and kisses for the rp 😘😘

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