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Walking On Ice

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Walking on ice
Not closing my eyes
Holding my breath
I don't even want to wear this dress

Walking on ice
Freezing yes, but not to death
Putting all the love and hate on hold
Trying to freeze the heart with ice like I have been told

Walking on ice
Not trying to be wise
I Just want to freeze a moment with no feelings, no pain
Standing steady, hands in the air letting the ice pass through each vein

Walking on ice
Freezing all the lies
Screaming at all the gods to look down and hear me
"GIVE ME A MOMENT TO BE ME"

Walking on ice
Not closing my eyes
Holding my breath
Trying to freeze all my cries

sarahgamal

@sarahgamal

A 32 mother of 2 .

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Comments & Feedback (14)

I hear ya hun 👍 Great stuff ❤😘

I love this I want to do this...just freeze everything 💙💙

Poignant piece🌟👍🌟

Really powerful write Sarah👍👏👏😘

@leelee101 thanks Lee and appreciate the rp 😘😘

@vieromero would be nice but then we wouldn't be human . Thanks for the rp 😘😘

@ckahn thank you Kristina and kisses for the rp 😘😘

@Stablish thanks Paul just couldn't myself to write anything today so was digging throw previous writes😊 thanks for rp 😘😘

Know how that feels, I work late though so I have all night to try now at least. Hopefully I'll get there. 👍😘

@Stablish goodluck 😘 am off for the night. Gonna go talk to my moon then sleep a bit 😊

Say hi from me lol, I can't see him through the clouds. Hope you sleep well😘

@sarahgamal you write some lovely words x

@sarahgamal huh so true and of course! 😘

@beergrylles thank you😊 and thank u for rp 😘

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