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Walking On Ice

sarahgamal
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Walking on ice
Not closing my eyes
Holding my breath
I don't even want to wear this dress

Walking on ice
Freezing yes, but not to death
Putting all the love and hate on hold
Trying to freeze the heart with ice like I have been told

Walking on ice
Not trying to be wise
I Just want to freeze a moment with no feelings, no pain
Standing steady, hands in the air letting the ice pass through each vein

Walking on ice
Crushing all the lies
Screaming at all the gods to look down and really see
"GIVE ME A MOMENT TO BE ME"

Walking on ice
Not closing my eyes
Holding my breath
Need someone to cover me with my dress

#emotional-struggle #general #metaphorical-journey #self-discovery
sarahgamal

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Comments & Feedback (9)

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 19, 2012 at 2:34 PM

Nicely done Sarah but I have to say 😢 you don't sound too 😃 👍❤🌹

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Nov 19, 2012 at 2:38 PM

@leelee101 I know but I am not too 😢 😉 Glad u liked it and now some 🍰🍰🍰🍰 for rp 😘

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 19, 2012 at 2:59 PM

@sarahgamal have some 💪💪💪💪💪 ❤🌹

glen
glen
Nov 19, 2012 at 4:00 PM

Really good this 😃😃😃

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Nov 19, 2012 at 4:14 PM

@glen thank you glen 😘 and more 🍰🍰🍰 for ur kind rp

sjw
sjw
Nov 19, 2012 at 4:17 PM

Awww hun I'm feeling this (((hugs))) 😘💝🍸

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Nov 19, 2012 at 5:22 PM

@sjw thank Sienna 😘❤ and thanks for the rp 🍰💐🍰💐🍰

gazplend
gazplend
Nov 19, 2012 at 6:31 PM

@sarahgamal beautifully written Sarah and very clever,love it ❤😘

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Nov 19, 2012 at 9:33 PM

A fabulous and emotive piece lovely lady 👏✨👏✨👏✨👏

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