Sunshine makes
an appearance
reflected in the rain
A wet prism of vibrant
colours in little
Puddles still remain
Tiny crystals embellish
a spiders embroidered
work of art
Woven with perfection,
precision as if
mapped out like a chart
Sapphire blue the
backdrop for a rainbow
that graces the sky
Spreading joy and
gladness as the
clouds cease their cry
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Really like this. Vibrant description. π That awkward moment when I'm not sure about the word drain. Maybe pool and remain. ππ
@sjw excellent πππ I'm shit at the new call of duty I can't get the hang of it yet π«ππ
@glen thanks hunni! Don't you think it's got a MW3 feel to it? It's just about learning the maps isn't it how do you rate it? π
@glen I know what you mean that was happening to me everytime I re spawned then I took their sniper rifle and got them back, I've even been forced to camp π±π
@sjw ha yeah it don't suit my style of play at all, I like to run around but on this one you just get taken out ha ill get better. ππ
@eddie12309 no your right I had refrain in my head but then I went blank lol, so appreciate it thank you ππ
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