How can I explain the pain of such loss...
A stabbing in the heart
My whole being ripped and torn apart
An aching in the pit of my stomach
Happiness I can no longer covet
The tears that won't stop
How gladly life for death I would swap
Minutes, hours and weeks become one
as my world crashes around me becoming undone
With nothing left to give
I only exist and no longer live...
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#emotion #loss. There's an ache in my heart,. A thorn in my side,. A splinter in my soul,. Nowhere I can hide,. There's dust in my eyes. And poison in my veins,. A sickness in my stomach,.
Everyday is like Walking with Missing limbs, Eating with No sense of taste, Looking through Misted lenses, Colours faded, A rainbow Of grey. All the people Are faceless.
#emotion #loss Losing you was like losing my heart. Losing you simply tore me apart. Losing you was a knife in my side. Losing you. Something I can't abide. Losing you was a terror unknown.
As I lie down. I can't seem to fall asleep. Thinking of you, tears roll down my face as I frown. Why did u have to go. There I clench my mouth, and my teeth. So much to learn, so much to know.
So, that's it, Been kicked, Out for the count, Now you've gone out, A candle snuffed, Goodbye and stuffed, What can I say.
"Look at me". His voice was low. The words came out deliberate and slow. "I don't want to". But she knew that wasn't true. She wanted to stare into his eyes and stay there forever. His hand came out.
All curled up in the corner, I am a terrible mourner. Tears falling from my face, Still trying to find my own place. A part of me just died with you. And I know that you are crying to.
For once Everything went as planned. I had you, you had me. My hand was in your hand. But like everything else You disappeared far to soon, Tonight my only company Is the moon.
@leelee101 @eddie12309 @smellyfingers @pthasse thank you for your lovely comments, this was an emotional write for me thankfully it's not this raw anymore really appreciate the RP ππππ
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