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Shouldn't It Be Give And Take?

I know I'm
not perfect
and I have
many flaws.
But listen up,
and please
put away
those claws.
My life doesn't
always smell
as sweet
as a rose.
But my downs
I choose to
not always
disclose.
I've always
been there
for you as
your rock.
When I need,
instead of
empathy I find
a lock.
You like me
around when
it suits your
needs.
Like my role
is to fulfil your
emotional
greed.
Now I see
that I need
to take a
step back.
Because we've
veered off that
friendship track.

sjw

@sjw

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Strong piece sienna, hope not true, you ok? (: xx

Ooo that's got some oomph for someone 😢 Great write hunny 👍❤

I love that line...."you like me around when it suit your needs like my role is to fulfil your emotional greed"....absolutely brilliant 👏👏👏

Agree with @patdolan83 . This line says it all. Hope u r ok

Great write honey! 👏 Agree with @patdolan83 😘❤🌹

Hope things get better😁

Hope things get better😔 really emotional write💙💜💚

Love it 👏👏😃👌🏃💨👯💨😝

Oh dear, I hope you get through it quickly! 😽

@minxyMolly thanks hun yes I'm ok just venting thanks for the RP 😘😘💝

@leelee101 thanks Lee feeling better now it's out and I've cleared the air now 😊 kisses for the RP 😘

@patdolan83 thank you!! I think I need to get angry and write a bit more lol mwaah for the RP 😘

@sarahgamal @sammielee46 thanks you two 👠👠👠👠👜👜 for the RP 😘

@Irrational_Kimmi thank you for the RP 😘💝

@Stablish thanks hun it's done and dusted now wrote this earlier peace is restored mwaah for the RP 😘

@KiaraNecole thank you for the RP 😊

@glen thanks Glen did you have a good Xmas? Mwaah for the RP 😘

@crowncottage thank you Linda just a little rant I had earlier but we've cleared the air now 😊 hope you had a nice Xmas 😘

Well, I think you're perfect xx💚

@sjw that's good, I'm glad it's sorted. Christmas was lovely until after lunch when I came down with the lurgey, I'm hoping to be ok by the new year! 😷

@TheCodsPollocks Awww thank you Jimmy 😊😘

@crowncottage oh no sorry to hear that 😔 sending you lots of positive energy hope your better soon 😘☕🍵💐

@tetti2 thank you for the RP 😘💝💐

Feeling this write my sweet...I really am...agree with @patdolan83 ..I loved the same line too...massive huggies 💪💪💪💪💪🌹🌹😘😘

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim its all sorted now but I'll still take the huggies mwaah for the RP 😘💝

Whoa, tough and expressive write. Brilliant emotive piece. Hope you're ok now 💚

Powerful write. Good to get it out of your system. Much love and hugs coming your way.✨🌟✨🌟🌺

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@sjw brilliant powerfull piece babe,glad it's all

@sjw powerfull write babe,glad it's all sorted now 👏❤😘💐🌹xx

@sleepydragon definitely I'm not one to hold grudges and hate having any kind of malice in my heart me and partner have a rule that we never sleep on an argument can't be doing with all that upset lol thank you for the love and hugs 😘💐

@naaviie thank you Nic yes I'm fine it's all sorted its that time of the month so I'm extra sensitive anyway lol 😘💝

@RichWithey Awww you lot are such a caring bunch 😊 Everything is fine thanks hun x

Awww hugs 💚✨💚

@LittleKitten thank you for the RP 😘💝

@sjw no probs😘

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