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Blood On His Hands

He was beside himself and frantic
He was in pieces and began to panic
Confusion from the paranoia and frustration
He was unsure how he got into this situation

He looked at himself for some clues
With blood on his hands he didn't know what to do
He had no memory and spoke in a language nobody could understand
Foreign faces surrounding and eyes fixed all around

He was transfixed by movement beside the twisted metal frame of the bus
A gentle swirling wind in the mist with dust
And then a soft glowing light did appear
He was hypnotised as the thoughts in his mind spoke so clear

He asked if he was dead and if the voice was heaven sent
He spoke of the waiting virgins and what gods plan for him really ment
Then the voice became angry and it's light turned black
He was told no God would want innocents killed in any form of an attack

The shadows began to move as the swirling wind gathered in pace
The voice was deeper and in the storm appeared a demonic face
With it's laughter and enjoyment for evil souls now dead
It swirled furiously around him and into hell he went at death

smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (18)

Hey stranger, nice work 😘

@Irrational_Kimmi hey you!! Hope all is well and thank you hun xx

Great stuff mate πŸ‘ liking this 🍻

Really like this and if I'm reading correctly it refers to martyrdom? 😘❀

@leelee101 thank you sir and for the beer πŸ‘

@sjw thank you hun and yes martyrdom but with a twist I guess 😍😘

A twist, but also the truth from what I know suicide and killing of innocents is disliked in the Quran 😘x

Rich. Interesting topic tooπŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸŒŸπŸ˜˜

@sjw of course and as it should be but as always others interpret these holy type books wrong and twist it for their needs, always have been these types and probably always will be IMO and I'm talking about the brain washers. Let me ask you tho, do you feel any sympathy for someone who has been brainwashed into killing him/herself with a blind "faith" in religion to kill on-masse and him/herself. Some of these individuals are reportedly very well educated family types.

@ckahn thank you hun xxx

I don't have any sympathy with them babe..BUT.. I can understand the sheer frustration the Palestinian ppl feel at the injustices they feel on a daily basis whilst the western governments sit back and put billions in the pockets of their oppressors so yes I sympathise with their cause but not their actions, taking lives of innocent people is wrong.

I agree the books are twisted by people for their own gains 😘

@sjw oh I'd love to get a few beers and chat all night and more with you babe Hahahaha πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

Less than 1% of Muslims are terrorists but 100%of terrorists are Muslims 😳

@glen I dunno mate, we're the ira terrorists Muslims for example? Lol

@smellyfingers ok 99% lol πŸ˜ƒ where you been mate πŸ˜ƒ

@glen hahaha my Maths is crap but sounds good to me mate. Living in Opussia for so long I needed a holiday on earth Lmfao πŸ‘

Very good. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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