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Opinionated... Me?

Some swearing...

If you think I'm offensive I say that's not my style
Come here, sit down and let's talk for a while

I like to question and test all that I find
I want to encourage you to open your eyes and your mind

Perhaps some folk are too precious to take a needle
Dish it out but can't take it, just like Jeremy Beadle

Its taken 38 years observing to be this opinionated
If you talk shit, in my humble opinion you need liberated
I must be going soft, first draft of this poem said you deserve berated

I don't know it all and try to keep on learning
I respect knowledge of elders, not kids that are gurning

To politicians conspiring to make themselves rich
I say, 'your days are numbered and payback's a bitch'

To Christians who refuse to question their god's will
I say, 'even Moses stopped god when he wanted to kill'

To Muslims who think its right to kill artists expressing their view
I say, 'you are animals and your god does not love you'

To Americans who think they are the world's salvation
I say, 'tell that to your citizens living like a third world nation'

To Teens thinking they have it bad
I say, 'look around at the pain of the world and be glad'

If you think I'm wrong, you're out of luck
'Find twenty pence and go phone someone that gives a fuck'

Burrfoot

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Comments & Feedback (24)

Haha I just posted a rant too, it must be one of those days!

Very well said mate 👏👏👏🍻👍

I think a standard call needs more than 20 pence nowadays lol great poem 😃👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Love this :)

( ̄^ ̄)ゞ i salute you sir ಠರೃ good opinions - i love beibg opinionated (^^)

Dammit why was i not following you? - oh well crisis averted :D

Lovely piece, first one I've read on here and I see there talent here

Well said👏nothing wrong with being opinionated as long as you listen to and respect others views 😘👏

Kapow 👊 38 I thought you were older. 😂

👏👏👏 love that last line burr 👍😂

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Powerful n loved it xx

@smellyfingers cheers pal @glen bloody inflation 😂

@misslittleDHP @sammielee46 thank you peeps 😊

@deviltortoise that was close! Cheers bud

@sir_jargie ty.. Plenty of talent and voices to be heard 👍

@sjw absolfreakinlutely I'm (nearly) always willing for my opinions to be amended by reason.. Mind you I like to hold a healthy disrespect for some views 😉

@eddie12309 cheers and yes, I get that a lot in real life 😒😂

@leelee101 cheers mate, been wanting to say it somewhere for a while 😂 also wanted to say 'a big hand for Jeremy beadle' but couldn't get it to fit 😂

@beckyboo130 @RichWithey thanking you peeps 👍

@Burrfoot 😂😂😂

No problem

Just seen this

Darn it, SEND button!!!!! Great stuff, love it 👍👏👏👏

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