Incy wincy pay rise
Not enough to bail me out
When debts are all a'risin'
Nothing left to pawn or tout
DOWN came the bailiffs
And took away my home
With cardboard box & blanket
Now on the streets I roam.
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Do you know what-I NEARLY followed that route! I'll take a look at yours (post I mean!) when through my feed, which is currently in overdrive! Glad you liked it😉😘
@Nom It was a borderline decision-a life of smut, or a life in a rut! Figured plenty outstanding entries of the former already done, so opted for the lower key latter😌 And a quiet thank you for repost...😌 Ha ha 😘
@Fly10 glad you chose that route. I'm slightly sick of the smut now (no offence to all who have posted smutty rhymes). A refreshing change. P.S, reposts are black market now!
@Stablish I was hoping in some tiny way, it would be relatable to someone...even as a bystander. Not all cases can be judged on first appearances-like the nursery rhymes we're all busy posting, there's often a sad or darker meaning behind it. V.grateful for RP 😌😘
@Fly10 Your welcome, I've never been great with money if I'm honest, I tend to try to bury my head in the sand if I can. It's not helped being on minimum wage, but I keep trying to get better work, but I earn enough to pay rent and food money and utility's so, I just try to think that I could be worse off, I try to stay positive when I can though. Your welcome for the repost😊🌺
@Stablish It'll come good for you-it's clear your heart is true & that you've got courage in abundance. When life is difficult it can often manifest itself in different ways-money problems are a prime example. It's not the answer to everything...but a little sure helps! Keep smiling 😌😚
@Fly10 I will especially after your kind words, I try to keep a positive outlook most of the time, it helps😊 you keep smiling too😄🌹
I have a work of this same subject, and is from back in 2007. I will try to post it when I get a chance.😊😳
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