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Incy Wincy No Hope

Incy wincy pay rise
Not enough to bail me out
When debts are all a'risin'
Nothing left to pawn or tout
DOWN came the bailiffs
And took away my home
With cardboard box & blanket
Now on the streets I roam.

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Mine was about tiny genitals! Sick 😝

Very topical!

Do you know what-I NEARLY followed that route! I'll take a look at yours (post I mean!) when through my feed, which is currently in overdrive! Glad you liked it😉😘

@iPuss Forgot to tag you on reply😖 See above!😄

@Fly10 Haha much loves x

@Nom It was a borderline decision-a life of smut, or a life in a rut! Figured plenty outstanding entries of the former already done, so opted for the lower key latter😌 And a quiet thank you for repost...😌 Ha ha 😘

@iPuss 😘

@Fly10 yeh... Like this. A change from the smut keepin it fresh

@wolfie I'm trying😉 Glad you liked it😌😘

@Fly10 glad you chose that route. I'm slightly sick of the smut now (no offence to all who have posted smutty rhymes). A refreshing change. P.S, reposts are black market now!

@Fly10 Poor Incy Wincy! Very funny :D

Yeah good take on it, I can relate unfortunately😓 Great poem😊👍

@Nom It wouldn't be the first bit of bootleg I'd participated in...😝 I won't tell if you don't 😉

@Stablish I was hoping in some tiny way, it would be relatable to someone...even as a bystander. Not all cases can be judged on first appearances-like the nursery rhymes we're all busy posting, there's often a sad or darker meaning behind it. V.grateful for RP 😌😘

@MrsS Thank you lady 😉😚

Sad but very well said, on theme for sure 💚

@Fly10 Your welcome, I've never been great with money if I'm honest, I tend to try to bury my head in the sand if I can. It's not helped being on minimum wage, but I keep trying to get better work, but I earn enough to pay rent and food money and utility's so, I just try to think that I could be worse off, I try to stay positive when I can though. Your welcome for the repost😊🌺

@Stablish It'll come good for you-it's clear your heart is true & that you've got courage in abundance. When life is difficult it can often manifest itself in different ways-money problems are a prime example. It's not the answer to everything...but a little sure helps! Keep smiling 😌😚

@naaviie Thank you lady-glad you liked the more 'serious' approach 😓 😄😘

@Fly10 - oh yes, gotta remind ourselves of the real world sometimes.

Love this !! 😍

@DaddyDooDahs Much obliged 😊😘

@Fly10 I will especially after your kind words, I try to keep a positive outlook most of the time, it helps😊 you keep smiling too😄🌹

@Fly10 Nice one babes 🌹🌹

@TheViolator Thank you😊 Good to see you back 😉😘

Very good, very current and apt.

This is pure genius...brilliant my sweet:):)

@misslittleDHP Thanks for lovely comments...& v.grateful for RP 😊😘

@VikingHorn Thank you, that was what I was aiming for😌😚

Love this, tremendous balance, entertaining too, shockingly good... :)))

@Barknbite Thanks for your comments-tried for a balance, so glad that came across😌

I have a work of this same subject, and is from back in 2007. I will try to post it when I get a chance.😊😳

BTW Good piece of work! 😃👍

@Lovinmalamutes Thank you, & yes, try & find it-would love to see it😉

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