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Paradoxical Love

Don't ever say I didn't tell you
I want to be clear
Make you aware
Of my biggest fear
You see I'll only
Let you down..
and probably
Screw you up
Chip away at our love
Until we slowly come unstuck

Promise you won't leave me
Is all I need to hear
If I give myself to you
Will you always
Keep me near?
Please don't let me down
You'll only mess me up
Though I can't offer
you the same
I need you as my backup.

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

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Just here to test the experience..

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πŸ’™πŸ’™ so heartfelt and an accurate portrayal of a relationship sometimes. Love it 😘

Nice!

@MrAlex Thank you, I'm glad you could relate. Much obliged for RP 😘

That's a lovely piece hun. Well written, touching. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Nom Thank you-your comments always valued 😊

@leelee101 For RP, always grateful. And thanks for comments..for

@leelee101 For RP & comment 😚 thank you. One of those I wrote, & can recognise myself in...a long time ago thankfully😌

@Fly10 we move on, but take things with us. Foolish to forget, I find πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 comments? More like comment. I remember a teacher at school telling us that 'nice' is an awful word to use...so actually please don't value this comment! I honestly am not quite sure what I've just written...

@Nom Woah...way too analytical! I meant your 'comments' generally are appreciated. If they contain more than one word, I consider them valued, as feedback is always goodπŸ˜‰πŸ˜š

@Fly10 this is quite an interesting piece and thought provoking hmmmmm -he sits to ponder- hehe 😘

@Nom And as I'M not exactly sure what I just said, leave it as this-one, none, some! All fine πŸ˜„

Really well written, love it😘

@smellyfingers Thank you 😘 And are you stroking your chin Vic Reeves style as you ponder? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@Stablish Happy you likeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜š

@smellyfingers @Stablish Much obliged for RP guys 😊😚

@Fly10 :)

@Fly10 haha I was indeed but now I'm rubbing my thigh, Bob Mortimer style Lmfao πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

I just love this...simply written but packs a punch...love it :):)

@smellyfingers So long as you're not licking my pic as you're doing it, then we're cool πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@misslittleDHP Appreciate comment & v.grateful for RP lady 😊😘

Ahhh, yes. I think we can all relate to this at some point in our lives. Good write! πŸ‘

Heartfelt ... I likey

@Fly10 hahahahahahahahaha I'm not weird honest πŸ˜œπŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

@ckahn @wolfie Thanks guys😊😚

@smellyfingers wait! What?! That's one of the things I liked about you!πŸ˜‰

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