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Scorned

Fly10
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I'm shallow
I'm weak
I never cared that much about you

I'm jealous
I'm a bore
As a loser
I'm sore
And you knew I could never be true

I'm impatient
I'm unkind
I'm twisted
Of mind
The signs were all there from the start

I'm damaged
I'm jaded
I stole
I degraded
I enjoyed it when I ripped you apart

I think
You will find
That not all
Are so blind
To believe what you want them to see

Even now
In defeat
You're entrenched
In deceit
And from that
You will never be free

I did not
Break your heart
Or tear you apart
You were the one
That betrayed me

And the fiction
You spin
Is now wearing thin
It's not real

It's just how you portray me.

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

#bestofopuss #emotional-betrayal #general #psychological-poem #self-reflection #toxic-relationship
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Comments & Feedback (14)

Burrfoot
Burrfoot
Jan 9, 2013 at 11:44 PM

You've quite a back catalogue of quality to choose from!

Stablish
Stablish
Jan 9, 2013 at 11:47 PM

Amazing, Burr's right any of yours would be a great pickπŸ‘πŸ’œπŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ‘

naaviie
naaviie
Jan 9, 2013 at 11:52 PM

I agree with the lads πŸ‘† you're always a brilliant read πŸ’šπŸ‘πŸ’šβœ¨

Fly10
Fly10
Jan 9, 2013 at 11:56 PM

@Burrfoot @Stablish @naaviie Aww, thanks guys-comments really appreciated. It's a pleasure to share work with you all 😊x

glen
glen
Jan 10, 2013 at 12:10 AM

Awesome write this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ƒ

beergrylles
beergrylles
Jan 10, 2013 at 12:11 AM

You haven't cheered me up yet ! Lol but I like it

sjw
sjw
Jan 10, 2013 at 12:35 AM

I remember this it's great to have a chance to read it again and it's nice to see you again πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Rapunzel
Rapunzel
Jan 10, 2013 at 4:00 AM

Just read this over and over very clever story telling its fluent and intelligent - thank you for sharing...

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jan 10, 2013 at 6:55 AM

Great one to pick. Relatable for many I think. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 10, 2013 at 7:57 AM

Brilliant. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Fantastic choice from your elegant back catalogue Leigh. Any one of 'em's a winner. πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Fly10
Fly10
Jan 10, 2013 at 10:35 PM

@Rapunzel Thank you for reading & commenting so positively. I'm glad you enjoyed 😌

Fly10
Fly10
Jan 10, 2013 at 10:36 PM

@glen @sjw @eddie12309 @leelee101 Thank you all - I'm enjoying catching up on some of your 🌟✨superb work!😌😘😘

steampunkwriter2
steampunkwriter2
Feb 2, 2013 at 5:18 AM

I like, I like a lot! Real depth!

Fly10
Fly10
Feb 3, 2013 at 1:14 PM

@steampunkwriter2 Thank you for taking the time to read through some of pieces-much appreciated πŸ˜ŒπŸ’š

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