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Scorned

I lie
I cheat
I'm shallow
I'm weak
I never cared that much about you

I'm jealous
I'm a bore
As a loser
I'm sore
And you knew I could never be true

I'm impatient
I'm unkind
I'm twisted
Of mind
The signs were all there from the start

I'm damaged
I'm jaded
I stole
I degraded
I enjoyed it when I ripped you apart

I think
You will find
That not all
Are so blind
To believe what you want them to see

Even now
In defeat
You're entrenched
In deceit
And from that
You will never be free

I did not
Break your heart
Or tear you apart
You were the one
That betrayed me

And the fiction
You spin
Is now wearing thin
It's not real

It's just how you portray me.

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

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Comments & Feedback (32)

Structure and rhythm a joy to speak aloud πŸ‘

Really good Leigh. Good to get it out of your system πŸ‘πŸ˜˜β€

Brilliant stuff, love the emotion and honesty in it. Portrays the whole two sides to every story perfectly 😘😘

Awesome stuff Leigh! Love the honesty in your poems xx

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The web of deceit ...how lies can be heard by only those who want to hear them...a brilliantly raw and emotive write...πŸ’šβ€πŸ’”πŸ’šβ€πŸ’”

Love the two sides to every story bit 😽

Brilliant πŸ’ž

@Burrfoot I'm glad you enjoyed the spoken flow-I'd kind of aimed for that, so good to hear 😌😘

@leelee101 Thank you, & you're right, it's good to reflect with the benefit of hindsightπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜‰

@MrAlex Thanks for your comments. Always two sides, but often I've found, one is far

@MrAlex Thank you. Always two sides isn't there, but I've often found one to be more skewed than the other...just my experiences however!πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

@smellyfingers Thank Richard, the personal ones often flow the easiest don't they?πŸ˜ŒπŸ’‹x

@lemonz Thank you😊

@misslittleDHP @sjw Two sides to every story, but my personal experiences have taught me that one is often far more skewed (or deluded?) than the other! Thank you both for your comments-always very much appreciated 😌😘😘

This is perfect. Definitely captured how I'm feeling in my situation perfectly.. Great piece 😊

Brilliant πŸ‘

@ShadeofGrey Thanks for your comment, & I'm glad you could relate in someway-makes the writing seem even more worthwhile 😌

@suzzeeq Thank you😌

@Fly10 absolutely brilliant! You do this so

@Fly10 absolutely brilliant! You do this so well babe! πŸ‘and great new pic hot lady! 😘

@gazplend Aww, thanks sweetie. Glad you liked my 'in your lying face' piece πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜˜

One of your best in my opinion πŸ˜ƒ fantastic

@Thebeautifulundead That's really lovely of you to say-thank you & glad you appreciated it & took the time to comment 😌😊😘

Totally agree with @Burrfoot. Strong rhythm matches your emotions. πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ

@caaht Thank you-really appreciate your comment😊

Fantastic. Although I'm wondering...what does this have to do with Conflicts? ^.^

Loved it, strong words and really good rhymes

@cperry Thank you. Appreciate you taking the time to read & comment 😌

Powerful, personal and full of spirit. Love it

@wolfie Only so much 'dissin' you can take isn't there? πŸ˜‰ Appreciate comment 😌

@Fly10 people always want to crush the people who shine the brightest.

@Fly10 people like the one you talk about in your piece always want to crush those who shine the brightest

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