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Little Star

Twinkle, twinkle, little star
How I wonder what you are?
You become a big black hole
Suck the world into your soul.

Nom

@Nom

Life's a mystery.

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How does a star have a soul? 😜

@naaviie everything has a soul! Please comment like this on all poems, the nasty naaviie is funny!

@naaviie (implied: the normal naaviie is dull 😜)

@Nom lol... Love it!

Everything has a soul?! How do you know?! That implies a soul has mass, doesn't it? Does a single atom have a soul too? P.S how dare you!

@wolfie :)

@naaviie yes. Even things with no atoms have souls, for example the letter 'r' (no doubt a word you are thinking of me at the moment)

@Nom - so what is a soul? Mr R?

@naaviie a soul is a being. Anything that exists has a soul.

That doesn't define a soul.

@naaviie how would you define a soul then?

The essence of life. So things that are not alive cannot have a soul.

@naaviie except the letter 'r. Can I have the nice naaviie back now?

Errr perhaps if you feed her more cake 😜 and apologise for calling her dull 😔

@naaviie 🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰 nice naaviie is never dull! I'm sorry....I did write a whole poem just for you... I'm only teasing 😳...am I forgiven?

@Nom of course you are, I'm guilty of enjoying a tease 😜 thanks for the cake!

So smiley! Thank goodness I'm a chatterbox. I really did like my smelly poem 😍

@Nom hummm I will crack that smile one day! Mwahh!

@naaviie I smile when I'm too lazy to write a comment!

Brilliant:):)

@misslittleDHP thank you and for repost :)

I enjoyed this, I didn't find it pitiful at all. I especially enjoyed the last line. Great write.

@LivingDeadGirl thank you, and for the repost

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