Sign In
Back

The Broken Heart - #1

Just another day. That’s how all strange things start, I guess. Just lazing about on the office chair, half-dazed, scanning through data of old cases on my computer screen. The room around me felt just as lazy as I did. It was another Friday, and everyone felt ready to go home. It was the beep of the lift that dragged me from my daze. Detective Wells emerged from the slivery walls, with a yellow file in his hands, with an unmistakable, bright red stamp, with one clear word: URGENT. As he walked through the office, my bones started tingling. I realised that a new case was on my hands, a new murder.

“Detective Hudson, we have a new case!”

“Great, what is it?” I replied, anxious to find out my new job

“A man has been found dead, with nothing but an incision to his heart and chest” came Wells’s reply

Looks like a case of a broken heart, I joked to myself in my head. New to the job, I hadn’t quite wrapped my head around the fact that it was murders that I was dealing with. I was trying to find people who would kill without warning, take another person’s life. It was still all fun and games.

“Let’s walk and talk” I announced, bouncing off of my chair with newly found energy

As we headed into the lift and I pushed the 0 button, I already began to prepare my mind for the mission ahead.

“Detective Hudson, where do you want to go first? The forensics lab to find out test results, or to the crime scene?”

YOU DECIDE:

1: Go to the Forensics lab

2: Go to the Crime Scene

Leave either a 1 or a 2 in the comments to cast your vote! Next part will be released on Sunday 29th April. Stay Tuned!

OllieBoyne

@OllieBoyne

Don't you just hate it when people end their Bios abrup

100
Stories

Similar Stories

Comments & Feedback (32)

[This comment has been deleted]

Love it! Forensics please!

@overskill @coolioXP Will take votes Monday as well!

[This comment has been deleted]

2:Crime Scene :)

@coolioXP No, a he, but I wouldn't blame you for misunderstanding. I will begin to develop individual characters in the next few parts :)

[This comment has been deleted]

Hmm, 1😷forensics

The crime scene :)

2, crime scene:)

detective conan will go to crime scene, so ill say crime scene:)

@jamiewho17 Detective Conan?

If he doesn't go to the crime scene first then he should be suspended pending further enquiry :)

@Weirdwolf But forensics are nearer and give better insight before heading to the scene

2!!!

@OllieBoyne results take time, and time is of the essence at a crime scene, evidence can be disturbed, I think this guy would phone through to the lab while investigating the scene :)

@Weirdwolf Crime scene is a more logical option, but if the majority of you want to go to the lab, so be it :D

@OllieBoyne option 2 then :)

2 crime scene

Crime scene - more please!!👍

2:)

oh, a japanese anime, about a young detective,..☺

@jamiewho17 Oh ok :)

2 the crime scene!!

2 !

2:)

Just going to go ahead and say 2 too :P

2 it is!

Great idea!! 2 please!

Yey great work!!

@OllieBoyne woo! Can't wait :D

2

@OllieBoyne this Is good:)

@chloelouuxoxo Thanks, have you read the other parts? :)

Similar Writers