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As the registration time finished, an all the pupils swiftly moved to their next class, a car pulled up outside. It was a Mercedes C-Class, and it was a maroon red. It was a convertible and the roof was up. As Shaun was on his way to his next lesson, he slowed his pace to see who's car it was.

Inside the car ...
A girl looks at her new school, before opening the door, and ...
"Don't forget, later you're going to be working on a deal for me Kezza!" said the man, who had a buzz cut, and a brown beard. He had grabbed her wrist as she was getting out.
"OKAY! Get off of me!" she grabbed her bag and hurried inside.
Shaun hurried over to his lesson.

Robert was walking down the corridor, when Kezza went flying into him! She'd slipped in a pool of water, and collided straight with Rob, and then because Rob fell, she fell on top of him.
"OHMYGOSH! I'm so sorry, I slipped in a pool of water or something." For a moment they both just stayed there for a few seconds, as though in a trance. Kezza then quickly got up. As she got up she offered a hand to Rob ...
"I'm Kezza by the way!"
"I'm Rob" replied Rob, who took the hand and got up off the floor.
"So, you new here?"
"Yeah, and what a great first impression, slipping into someone and then landing on top of them. Hehe" her cheeks went bright red, and Rob could tell she was embarrassed. She flicked her hair back, and re-did her fringe quickly.
"I'll show you around if you want"
"Well, don't you have a lesson?"
"Nah, free period."
"Okay then, ... but only if you don't mind!"
"Of course I don't, I wouldn't have asked otherwise!" said Rob, jokingly.

Series 1-Episode 1-Part 2
Again, any feedback would be appreciated! All characters are being introduced slowly, so if your character hasn't shown up yet, don't worry!

ben_leggatt

@ben_leggatt

18years old, hope to have a career in the media industry at some point in the near future :) Oh and I'm welsh :) and every story I make I will hopefully manage to make into a film or TV Series at some point in the future. Director and co-founder of CleverBoxMedia.com ! Anybody who would be willing to help me make my stories into either a book, film or Tv series just let me know. INSTAGRAM-Ben_Leggatt Black belt and coach in karate for Seki Ryu Zan!!! Also, anyone who's just starting and needs advice and help, just let me know :) Oh and if you show me respect I will show respect back to you. Many Thanks,

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Comments & Feedback (13)

@WildOneKezza ur in this part :)

@ben_leggatt Just read your bio I'm getting my debut in a few months my agent is sorting x because my dream is to be an actor I know many directors and editors writers and s

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Ect* FUCKING send button right by the space button lol I'll help you when I'm in it ok

@Penno really? Thanks man! :D

@ben_leggatt Yes and no problem x

@Penno thanks :D whereabouts are some of these directors then :) :D I'm guessing London area :)

100% correct that's where I'm gonna be stationed x Then I'm gonna be all over the place x

@Penno nice!!! :D

@Penno so around which places? Will u be in Wales? :D I'm in North Wales :)

Hahahaha! Awesomes! I am loving this! You gotta keep writing!

@WildOneKezza I will :)

@ben_leggatt i like want more. Right now...!

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