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One day I'd like a fireplace
To place the only memento I've got
A beautiful Victorian fireplace
Upon it I would sit a clock

A clock given to my grandfather
For his service and dedication
Driving ambulances all his life
With hard work and admiration

I'd polish it's wood and turn it's dial
Carefully place it's hands
For its a special memory
And alone it would stand

I'd cast my eye upon it
Each and every day
Remembering my mothers stories
Before she passed away

You see the clock is the only thing I have of hers
Everything else was lost
As her years of self neglect
Came at a terrible cost

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (17)

@AWriterGirl 😊

@suzzeeq & @ckahn thank you for kind reposts. Glad you liked it enough to share πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜

Awe, so lovely πŸ˜’πŸ’š

Very good hun πŸ‘β€πŸ‘πŸ˜˜ morning β˜•

@naaviie @leelee101 thank you both. πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜

Lovely πŸ•‘πŸ˜ŒπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@eddie12309 this is really touching and sad good write πŸ‘πŸ˜ͺ

@damoambrose thank you. I find honesty in my writing helps! @MrsS thank you and for your kind repost 😊

A wonderfully written piece hunπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@misslittleDHP thank you and for the repost.

@eddie12309 I like it. It's a very simplistic yet beautiful poem, a more somber tone, but it's paired well with the subject matter. Good flow and constant rhythm

Overall: great job! πŸ˜ΌπŸ’™πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŽ‰

Very heart warming even tho it's sad πŸ˜“ 😘

@AWriterGirl thank you. Thats the best constructive comment I think I've ever had. Wish more people would. Glad you liked it. 😊

Beautiful and emotive... πŸ’—πŸ’—

@sjw thank you, I know it's sad 😌 at least I have something. Thank you for the kind repost too. 😊😘

@chy thank you 😊

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