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On Top Of The World

I like to be on top, that's where I love to be
Not first in competition or sexually

Fell running to the top, of my favourite hill
Its like time surrounding me is standing still

It's a magical place, with ancient tranquility
I feel my exposure and vulnerability

On top of the world, that's where I am
Where all is silent, all is calm

I can see for miles, and miles around
The pounding of my heartbeat, the only sound

If I could reach up, I would touch the sky
Hop on a cloud, and wave goodbye

A drizzle of reflection touches my face
This is my tor, my thinking space

The cool breeze whispers lovingly in my ear
"We're waiting for you, we're always here"

A feeling I'm at one with mother earth
A feeling so deep, an inner rebirth

I close my eyes, and fill my lungs
Ancient voices, whispering tongues

Her arms embrace me, a comforting kiss
Being on top of the world, An eternal bliss

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (23)

You're on fire this morning! πŸ˜‰πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ this sounds like my kinda bliss 😌 However, I'll settle for an overnight stay at a friend's tonight - kids staying firmly put at home with Daddy!!! πŸ‘πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

@MrsS oh that does sound like bliss. Oh to have a babysitting genie !πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ’šπŸ™†

@MrsS thank you for repost too πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

@eddie12309 I seriously can't remember the last time we even had time alone together, so I grabbed the offer when he gave it!!! 😳😝😊

Lovely stuff hunny πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Beautiful thought πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

A lovely read for a great sunny day

@leelee101 @naaviie thank you both and for reposts. πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜Š

@Edhum3 thankyou but it want sunny when I was up there this morning πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ’š

@lonelynutmeg98 @ gazplend thank you both for kind reposts πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

This is great!

Beautiful description :)

@pthasse @ZephyrForza thank you both. Glad you liked it πŸ‘πŸ’š

This is a glorious write...really enjoyed reading it....fabboπŸ’—πŸ’šπŸ’—πŸ’š

Superb πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ’¨πŸ˜

Excellent. There's something about high, natural places that stir the soul. β›³πŸƒ

Excellent! I feel exactly the same way about secluded peaks.

@misslittleDHP thank you and for repost. Glad the imagery came across☺😘.

@glen thank you. What's with the trumping elephant. Are you trying to insinuate that's what I'm like running up a hill πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@Weirdwolf @VikingHorn thank you both. Your right there is something indescribable about being high. @Vikinghorn I can imagine that feeling too. Climbed a few minis at the lakes this year. ☺ thank you for reposts too πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@eddie12309 no probs anytime :D

Exploring and finding those pieces that fit, is such a fantastic feeling!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰πŸ˜„

Yes thank you. Glad you understood it. And for the repost too. πŸ‘πŸ’š

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