Naked In The Rain

gazplend • 442 followers

The sky's dark as night
But it's almost mid day
A storm for sure is on its way
A distant rumbling,flash of light
Then the rain crashes down with all it's might
Everybody is racing for home
But I want to go out all alone
And stand in the rain naked and free
Let it wash all the troubles away from me
I need a woman with spirit and heart
To stand there with me,never apart
Run around laughing in the storm
To heal my soul and feel reborn.

#emotional-healing #general #nature-metaphor #personal-liberation

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Comments & Feedback (43)

Jun 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM

This is really good. Your best yet. 👍

Jun 28, 2012 at 10:58 AM

I really like this :D very good Gaz ! x

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:07 AM

Superb Gaz 👍

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:10 AM

@eddie12309 really! Thankyou,thought I would try serious for a change,have to try more! Thankyou! 👍😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:10 AM

@megz92 thankyou Megan! 😍😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:11 AM

@gazplend good stuff gaz. 👍😊

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:11 AM

@smellyfingers cheers mate and Thanx for repost! 👍👍👍☔

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:11 AM

@eddie12309 thankyou for repost 😍😍💐

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:14 AM

Ohh How beutiful words , What a wounderful wish, to have someone to share that moment with👍👍👍👍👍

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:15 AM

Your most welcome. It's good to be serious once in a while😊

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:17 AM

Awesome!! Love this 💞💞💞💞💞 do you need a☔to protect you from that ⚡⚡💧💨

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:18 AM

@leelee101 Thanx mate,glad you like 👍👍

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:19 AM

@simplystylish still wishing! Hope your feeling ok😘💐

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:19 AM

@eddie12309 I find it hard to be serious! 😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:20 AM

@sjw no! Naked into the fray! Don't call the police though! 😍😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:21 AM

@sjw @simplystylish Thanx for Reposts lovelies 😍😍

Jun 28, 2012 at 1:35 PM

Beautiful, really loved this! 💚 do you mind if I write one along the same theme?

Jun 28, 2012 at 1:37 PM

I love this...I'll get wet with you💦💦💦💦💦💦💦

Jun 28, 2012 at 1:52 PM

@naaviie go ahead nix,I don't mind at all,thankyou 😘😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 1:52 PM

@misslittleDHP got to be naked Kim! 😜

Jun 28, 2012 at 1:54 PM

Lovely jubbly 😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 1:54 PM

@naaviie I know you have😉

Jun 28, 2012 at 2:12 PM

@gazplend I am look...👣👂👃💪

Jun 28, 2012 at 2:35 PM

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Jun 28, 2012 at 3:48 PM

@misslittleDHP haha,but I want to see more than feet,nose,ears and an arm!! 😜

Jun 28, 2012 at 3:48 PM

@coolioXP aw thankyou😃😘👍

Jun 28, 2012 at 4:21 PM

@gazplend Wonderful imagery-well done you, this is beautiful 😌😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 4:23 PM

@Fly10 thankyou! It's actually true too! 😘😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 4:24 PM

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Jun 28, 2012 at 4:54 PM

@gazplend....💅👀....can't find a body.....ha ha😃😃

Jun 28, 2012 at 4:55 PM

@misslittleDHP wasn't your nails I wanted to see!! Haha 😍😍😜

Jun 28, 2012 at 5:39 PM

@gazplend ooooo mr saucy...and it's not even the evening yet....must be the heat☀☀☀☀☀

Jun 28, 2012 at 5:58 PM

@misslittleDHP it's you Kim! I blame you! 😜

Jun 28, 2012 at 6:48 PM

@gazplend I have been told once or twice I'm a terrible influence...small peeps usually are...we look so small and innocent 👼👼👼👼👼👼👼

Jun 28, 2012 at 7:43 PM

@misslittleDHP I can honestly say I never thought you were innocent! And that's fine with me! 😍😜

Jun 28, 2012 at 7:57 PM

@gazplend tee hee☺☺☺☺☺☺

Jun 28, 2012 at 7:59 PM

@misslittleDHP your a lady and a flirt! Perfect combination! 😍😜😘

Jun 28, 2012 at 8:09 PM

@gazplend why THANKYOU kind sir...as you are a gent and a flirt too😘💘🎩👒

Jun 28, 2012 at 8:10 PM

@misslittleDHP in public yes,not such a gentlemen in private! 😉😉😉

Jun 28, 2012 at 8:18 PM

@gazplend ha ha ha😃😃😃😃

Jun 28, 2012 at 11:10 PM

Ooooh love being naked in the rain. Did it once it was sooo 😊😊😊

Jun 29, 2012 at 9:54 AM

@chy ok come and do it again! 😜😘

Jun 29, 2012 at 10:11 AM

@gazplend ☺☺☺definitely not in this rain! My has some land in Jamaica with a small lake, beautiful & SECLUDED 😊😉 really loved this one, like your serious poetic side 😃 hope you find that lady to get naked in the rain with and somewhere private to do it or 🚓🚓🚓🚓🚓🚓

Jun 29, 2012 at 10:49 AM

@chy omg that sounds amazing!! I hope I

Jun 29, 2012 at 10:49 AM

@chy get her soon too!! 😘😘

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