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Dead End? Part 2

This part is pretty lame, part 3 is much better.

Two weeks after the bomb had wiped out London the virus had spread rapidly all over the country. Only about five percent of the population with the rare blood type AB seemed unaffected. Paul had gone to bed with his wife of four years with his son asleep in the next room. What he woke up to will scar his memory for the rest of his life. His wife started to cough violently which roused him from sleep. "You ok honey?, what's wrong" he said with alarm in his voice. She was shaking like mad and breathing very erratically Paul was beside himself with worry, he'd seen this before.

One week earlier in the village hall the town had got together for a meeting to decide the battle plan needed to survive. No news of a virus had reached them with the phones down and the internet not working. Paul was drinking a cup of tea listening to his next door neighbour giving a speech (to the worried few who had made it) on food rationing when he noticed a few people starting to cough around him. Within two minutes of hearing the first cough, everyone seemed to be doing it. Then they all started to shake uncontrollably in their chairs and thrash their heads from side to side before they all just stopped. There was about five seconds of silence before the place was turned into an absolute bloodbath. Paul who was sitting at the back saw the look in their eyes change as everyone started attacking one another. There were no fists thrown. They were clawing and biting each other like wild animals. Paul had to smash a chair over the head of his old school teacher Mrs Robson to prevent her from trying to bite him with a look in her eyes of pure rage. He had bolted for the back door and escaped, not before he had turned round and seen the carnage. People he once new and had drunk and ate with were now on top of each other tearing out each others eyes and eating whatever flesh was on show.

When Sally had stopped shaking she just lie there. She didn't move a muscle for a few seconds which seemed like minutes to Paul. Then she sat up quickly and turned to look at Paul with a blank look in her eyes and a strange expression on her face. She went to stand up. "I'm so sorry honey" Paul said with tears in his eyes as he brought the claw hammer down, there was an almighty crack as the claw embedded in her skull followed by a fountain of blood that oozed out of the open wound and soaked the bed with blood and brain matter. Sally collapsed on the bed face down with the hammer still sticking out of her head. Paul slumped to the floor in despair he couldn't keep his eyes of the hammer sticking out of his dead wife's head "What have I done?" he shouted before he heard Peter calling for his mum as he often did in the morning followed by the dog barking and something else. "Did Peter just cough" he thought to himself as he stood up and pulled the hammer out of his wife's head with a crunch.

Part 3 to follow at some point.....

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I'm B+, survived!!!:D ok, continue reading...:D

Stunningly good, as always!!!;)

@sark phew I'm glad you made it lol πŸ˜œπŸ‘€

Lol I'm a B not sure which tho lmfao haha πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ awesome babe this is good

Im B Wooo!

@aleishagayle20 maybe I should of done some research first lol but anyway it don't matter what blood type you are, your getting eaten in part 3 ha

Right I'm changing the blood type ok lol

@glen ahhhh!! 😁 I'm coming for you then Glenn need some zombie sex mwahahaha πŸ‘ΏπŸ˜ hehehe

@glen no way!

@MrAlex @aleishagayle20 c'mon Bees, let's make a war!!!

@sark sorry ha it's now going to be AB as the Internet told me that is the rarest lol sorry ha

@glen fuuuuuu.....

@aleishagayle20 I was going to spare you but you have spelt my name wrong for the last time πŸ’πŸ‘€

@glen brilliant mate! Love it πŸ˜ƒ

@glen you should have saved me, I'm going to kill ya in my next short story, "Glenicator" xD

@gazplend cheers mate I'm thinking I'm just going to use people names from opuss as my victims lol YOUR ON THE LIST lol

Loved it, more please πŸ’ž

Love it Glen!! πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€

My names Paul lol, I was sucked right into it, gory stuff but defiantly worth carrying on, love the direction your taking it inπŸ˜„πŸ”žπŸ”΄πŸ”žπŸ”΄πŸ˜„

@Weirdwolf cheers mate πŸ”«

@sjw thanks Hun πŸ˜œπŸ‘€

@Stablish ha ha sorry Paul but least you survived for now ha I think I'm going to make Paul a spurs fan lol I joke mate no football in this

I don't wanna be a victim 😼

@Dj_Mac your spared lol

Phew, I'm AB.

Phew cuz I'm O positive xxx

Love it! Very atmospheric. πŸ”¨ ( yeah, I know it's not a claw hammer but you have to work with what you got!)

@Seamonster then you must be a real Seamonster lol that's as rare as unicorn blood only 1 percent of the population are AB so says the Internet β˜•πŸ‘€

@TheCodsPollocks cheers mate lol πŸ”¨

@glen woo hop! ( that's my new exclamatory remark replacing woo hoo) that was gripping!

@glen check out my latest. Hope you like it

@ckahn @TheCodsPollocks @Dj_Mac @Seamonster @Stablish @Weirdwolf @sjw @sark @gazplend @MrAlex massive tag lol right I don't know if your interested really but part 3 is posted πŸ’

Oh no D:

@iPuss arh you finally read one of my posts lol thanks 🎸β™₯πŸ’πŸ’¨

That's gory and exciting! whoop

@milkeyedmender ha cheers mate part 3 is better 😜

It's not lame! πŸ‘

@leelee101 ha cheers mate πŸ˜ƒ

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