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A Talk With Myself

You are worthless
Admit it girl!
I am worthless

(I wish I had purpose)

Only I can understand you.
Say it girl!
Only you can understand me.

(I want to be understood)

You are nothing without me.
Say it girl!
I am nothing without you.

(I strive for identity)

You can never break free.
Admit it girl!
I can never break free.

(Unless I break these bonds)

Inside your mind I will sit.
Hear me girl!
Inside my mind you will sit.

(But I can push you out)

I am your darkest thoughts.
Acknowledge me girl!
I acknowledge you.

And with that your power is broken!

jojo72

@jojo72

Writer, reader, friend, mother and wife.

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Comments & Feedback (21)

Great stuff jojo. You don't really feel that way do you hunny? 👍😘❤

Clever... Kinda scary though! 😳

@leelee101 No I don't sweetie, don't panic :). Well, maybe at some points in my life, but certainly not all those feelings at once and none of them now 😍

@naaviie I was aiming for slightly sinister as all are deepest fears feel that way if we let them don't you think? 😜

@naaviie should read our not are. And thank you for finding it clever 😘

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@RichWithey lol. Sounds like a good plan of action. I stomped on

@RichWithey Arrgghh fat thumbs strike again! .. *mine a few years ago and when they try and raise their ugly heads I sit in them firmly until they suffocate 😜. I like the sound of a poem idea 😄

on not in obviously sigh. If its not my thumbs it's my spelling. Or can I blame that on auto correct? 😉

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Yeh, definitely, well captured! 💚

@RichWithey lol. These phones just hate it when we try and break the mould. No original spelling allowed! Oh, hang on, that maybe the voices actually... 😁

@naaviie Thank you hun. Really appreciate your feedback ❤

Powerful piece. Simple with so much depth. 😘💐💐

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@ckahn Thank you so much for reading it hun. ❤

@RichWithey Now THAT I can believe lol. 😂 Scary thought! 😱

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This is awesome, there's truth in that little madness 😽💐

@sjw Thank you!

@jojo72 @RichWithey powerful & brilliant piece dear. Echoing those voices of self doubt within most hav probably experienced @ some point in their lives.& vino music to drown them out.. I concur.. A great plan!!👍😃😃take a bow hun🌹🌹🌹xx

@jojo72 ps so glad you're not feelin that way.. Was getting teensy bit worried with you havin gone quiet on the writing front for a day or two!??😏🌺

@qualified2dream thanks for your encouraging comments babes. Have had a blinding headache for a few days. Hard to concentrate. 😍

@jojo72 ouch!! Poor u😱how yr bettr soon😘🌹🌷

@qualified2dream thanks babes ❤

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