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tripwires

These are our final moments
I would have liked to stay
You laid too many tripwires
That just got in the way

It's like a mental minefield
Too painful to traverse
Be careful where to step
Just in case the pain gets worse

A guarded, barbed wire friendship
Pulling at my skin
You never once revealed
The true beauty that's within

I guess we've reached an impasse
You've left a mark, embossed
You had to play, you've had to pay
You're well and truly lost

Too many tribulations
Without a reason why
If you really mean it
Then I'll just say goodbye

For Kate x

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Comments & Feedback (53)

Brilliant stuff @leelee101 hope you're ok though hun 😨

@Irrational_Kimmi of course hun thank u. Just something I cooked up 😍😍😍

@Irrational_Kimmi thank u ❀ for the RP hunny πŸ’‹

@chy thanks for the RP sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

@leelee101 very welcome, I love sharing your talent πŸ˜ŠπŸ’‹ glad it wasn't about you! Hope all is well πŸ’‹

Great write my sweetπŸ˜ƒβ˜ΊπŸ˜ƒβ˜Ί

@leelee101 oh my god that's brilliant Lee.... I completely relate to it!!! Have you been living in my pocket...??!? πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

Sad but sensitive write. Lovely. πŸ˜”πŸ‘πŸ’š

@chy all is dandy when you flatter like that sweetheart! Thank u for those lovely comments πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@Bunts I sometimes forget what some people have gone thru when I write... From what I understand this cold be for you couldn't it Kate? Want a dedication? πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@eddie12309 aw thank u Hun πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@Bunts thank u for the RP hunny πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

@misslittleDHP thank u Kim ❀ and πŸ’‹ for the RP 😘😘

@leelee101 it's all true and well deserved πŸ’—β€

@chy aw.... ☺ blushes πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@leelee101 yeah.. It's my story 😳. So you were listening :D xxx πŸ‘πŸ‘

@leelee101 😊

Nice to see your sensitive side mateπŸ‘πŸ˜Š

Awww you've gone all soft and fluffy! ❀🌹😘

@leelee101 glad

You are ok sweetie 😊😊😊

@Bunts of course πŸ’‹

@sjw every now and again Hun! πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sjw thanks for the RP Hun πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@Bunts I'll make a small adjust, a little later. Then it's all yours πŸ‘πŸ˜˜β€

@Irrational_Kimmi β€β€β€πŸ’‹

@TheCodsPollocks cheers jimmy πŸ‘πŸ»

@leelee101 ah bless you!!! Really??? Don't you mind? Xxxxx

@Bunts why would I? It might well have been written for you hun xxx

@Bunts have a look...❀

@sara_lou thanks for the RP sweetheart πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@leelee101 πŸ˜ƒ ah, I love it!!! πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹ thank you do much.. Thats so perfect...😊😊xxxxxxxx

@leelee101 ❀

@Bunts you, sweetheart, are welcome. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ’‹β€

@leelee101 you're welcome hunni β€πŸ’‹

@Bunts Kate, are you about? ❀

@leelee101 hello you! Good day?xx

@Bunts yes thanks hun, but mental on here this afternoon! A little hot and steamy to say the least! Which strangely enough is what I want to talk to you about... I don't know if you know, but Boo has started following me on Opuss. Now there was a lot of saucy shenanigans going back and forth, and I don't mean to interfere, but I just wondered if she's ok with all that kind of stuff. I've got my responsible adult head on at the mo... It's ok though I've got others! πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ’‹β€πŸ˜

@leelee101 .. You could be reading my mind! I'm had a word with her yesterday when she "liked" one of my poems... Wasn't overly naughty, and she likely wouldn't understand... But I asked her to back off from it, or at least delete me if she wanted to do the poems. She's at my my

@leelee101 still writing....

@leelee101 mums so its a good heads up, and I really appreciate it Lee. I can get into her account from here, so I'll go on and delete you from her list... She likely just saw we were following each other and joined in.... I'll do that now (with my responsible adult head) ... Then pop on another!! 😜 thanks Lee, you're a little diamond on the quiet ain't you...!!!!! πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜

@Bunts aw it just came to me this afternoon, I remembered seeing her name come up, and I've been talking to you, then with this afternoon. I just made a mental note

@Bunts to run it past you. Didn't want her getting in trouble! Ok glad that's helped, can I pop another head on now? πŸ˜‚πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

@leelee101 ...thank you Lee. Xxxx

@Bunts you're welcome sweetheart πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@leelee101 yes... I've done the deed... Take sensible head off now β€β€β€πŸ’‹πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜œ

@Bunts haha! Which one did you put on? πŸ‘πŸ’‹πŸ˜

@leelee101 hmmm ... Not sure, what do you reckon... Then I can do a qk poem before I get my head down!!😜😜❀

@Bunts mmm yes bedtime approacheth... So I reckon snoozy head on, and a nice slow late night post hunny... βœ¨πŸŒ™πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ’‹

@leelee101 so it shall be! Xx

@Bunts and very nice it is too. Mine's up too πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 yes, and it's lovely! Goodnight xcode

@leelee101 goodnight xx not code.. That predictive text gone mad! 😍

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