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leelee101
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I just like this one.

These are our final moments
I would have liked to stay
You laid too many tripwires
That just got in the way

It's like a mental minefield
Too painful to traverse
Be careful where to step
Just in case the pain gets worse

A guarded barbed wire friendship
Pulling at my skin
You never once revealed
The true beauty that's within

I guess we've reached an impasse
You've left a mark, embossed
You had to play, you've had to pay
You're well and truly lost

Too many tribulations
Without a reason why
If you really mean it
Then I'll just say goodbye

#bestofopuss #emotional-poetry #general #metaphorical-language #relationship-breakdown
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Comments & Feedback (12)

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 4:55 PM

@glen There might be another one yet... πŸ˜‚

glen
glen
Jan 9, 2013 at 4:57 PM

This has got an awesome flow to it mate, love it, I've read loads today lol I might repost another as well πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ

patdolan83
patdolan83
Jan 9, 2013 at 5:14 PM

I didn't see this one the first time round, glad you reposted it πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

sjw
sjw
Jan 9, 2013 at 5:44 PM

I remember this one too πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜˜

TheCodsPollocks
TheCodsPollocks
Jan 9, 2013 at 6:10 PM

Love this one Lee. I've missed so many posts first time round. I'm glad glen thought of reposting. πŸ˜Šβ˜•πŸΊπŸ‘

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 6:12 PM

@sjw glad you like it hun. ❀❀ thanks for the RP Sie πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 6:13 PM

@patdolan83 aw cheers Pat appreciate that comment. πŸ‘ Thanks for reposting sir πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ»

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 6:15 PM

@glen cheers mate. You've created a great day today, thank you. πŸ‘ And thanks for the RP too 🍻🍻

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 6:16 PM

@TheCodsPollocks cheers fella. πŸ‘ Glad you like it. I've missed loads too, it's been great to be able to read them today. πŸ‘ Thanks for the RP my man 🍻🍻

misstezaa
misstezaa
Jan 9, 2013 at 6:49 PM

This is awesome :)

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 9:52 PM

@misstezaa thank you. πŸ‘ And thanks for the RP too ❀

leelee101
leelee101
Jan 9, 2013 at 9:53 PM

@misslittleDHP appreciate that RP hun πŸ‘ Thank you ❀

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