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To Remember

Your face isn't clear in my head,
I can't even remember things you said,

Yet I've spent countless hours in your arms,
Priceless anticipation, falling for your charms,

But those blue eyes are fading away,
Someday I won't remember, I dread that day,

I close my eyes, lay back to think of you and me,
It is your touch, your feel, not the things I see,

But I hold this photograph in my hand now,
The one you gave me after an ancient little row,

"To remember me, dear," you said with a small smile,
"Your mind is slipping away, it has been for a while."

I don't know this room, I just lie back on this bed,
Clutching the photo tight, trying to keep you in my head.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (23)

@VikingHorn - I can't work out whether this is on time or not - oh well! 💚

Love it!! 💙

@MelchiorJ13 - ☺💚😘✨

Awesome write nic 😢👍❤

@naaviie not sure if it is😒 but its still a great piece! Hella better than mine! ☺👍👏

@leelee101 - thank you, for my great uncle 💚😢😘✨

@AWriterGirl - oh well not too bothered about entering the comp really I just like the inspiration. Thanks for liking ☺

Very poignant✨👍✨

Yes, it is. I try to not rush people too much! Sweet and sad, and very good.

@ckahn @VikingHorn - thank you 💚💚💚

This is wonderful Hun 😃😃😃😃

It's sounds depressing...but I like

@misslittleDHP @16Moonlight - thank you!!! 💚😘✨

@naaviie sweet like you but sad unlike you! Brilliant nic 😘😘👍

@gazplend - thanks big guy 😘😘

@naaviie big guy! I like that 💪😉

Beautiful piece lady-especially love 'but those blue eyes are fading away' as it resonates with me personally re an old love 😔💔 Excellent work👍😌😘

@Fly10 - awe thanks sweetie, glad it is re

@Fly10 - awe thanks Leigh, nice that it is relatable 💚💔💚😘✨

Beautiful piece babe xx

@sjw - thanks sweetie, hope you're enjoying your hols. Thanks for sending a slice of sun over here ☀😜

You are a real writing talent, Nicola. You write words that flow and rhyme beautifully. I don't know how you do it, but I tip my hat off to you for your brilliance! 😄☺👏

@milkeyedmender - wow, thank you for that amazing compliment, you're too kind and I am truly flattered! 💚💚💚

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