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Kantanka

When kantanka come
My head is itchy buzz
Eyes throb, swell-ache
Afternoon long
Fuse short
Brittle mood snap,
Barb jump out!
Tolerance threaded
On spiker tongue
Nerves thread -fray
Raw and plucked.
Then I'm fucked.

When Kantanka come
Tiny task grates -
All in the way
Of nothing.
Stamp about, shout
Who put this here?
Why does no one ever
Friggin tidy up?
Dog move!
Temper fly
Stand by:

When Kantanka come
Take your sympathy
Cut along dotted line
And shove up arse.
Don't want soft touch
Hate hate hate that...
Snarl at me.
WITH me.
Fury want out
Slam, feel pain
Tear at fucking clothing
self loathing
Hot skin
Lips drawn, fangs out
Rip out claw finger
Flared eyefire
Burning tongue
Hurt and
Hurt and
Hurt and
Hurt
Brow pressing
Child distressing
Marriage messing
Anger.

Their faces plead
And the storm abates
Pity and love
Divide the clouds
Their tender eyes say
Please...
Please don't
Kantanka us.

wolfie

@wolfie

The Octoberman. All I need is a bottle of Talisker, a keyboard and you. Facebook: Nikarkham www.nikarkham.co.uk

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Comments & Feedback (15)

I am so confused after reading this :P It's 1 am, at work. I'll have to re-read this later, after a few hours of sleep! :)

Lol. Pologies Zed. The feeling this writing aims to described is irrational and difficult too

@wolfie strange πŸ‘

@TheViolator aye... It's late.it's all about being ratty and losing my temper.

@wolfie time for tea and a bacon bap lol

@wolfie No need to apologize. These are your words, your feelings... I'm just too tired to figure it out. :P

@ZuperZed @TheViolator ok... This was a toughie do bacon baps all round

@TheViolator @ZuperZed this was a toughie so bacon baps all round

@wolfie good man πŸ”πŸ˜œπŸ˜œ

@wolfie yay! :)

@TheViolator @ZuperZed mmmm bacon :/)

@wolfie Git lol

@wolfie bet it felt good to unload that one nik. Good write sir. 😊

@wolfie Great piece & I totally get it-can almost feel the pent up emotion boiling over!πŸ˜– Hope today Kantanka receded πŸ˜‰

@Fly10 @leelee101 thanks for getting it. I figured it might just come across as psychobabble but I'm glad you got the idea

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