Patiently waiting for a compliment,
Any one would be heaven sent.
I've been insulted for so long,
And I need someone to prove them wrong.
Make me feel good and adequate,
Or amazing would be better yet!
Tell me my poems make you smile,
Or that some have the power to make you cry for a while.
I've been insulted and am really sad,
If you could compliment me, I'd be really glad. :)
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14 years old. Female. British. Likes to rhyme. Is addicted to Teh Internetz.
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Comments & Feedback (17)
Your poems are beautiful, especially your most recent works! Now if you would just return the favour... ;)
@Nom When reading your poems, I feel the flow...They fill me with that inner glow..Your profile pic is pretty aswell...You're talented, that I can tell. 😃
@ZuperZed You're talented and kind of heart, a brilliant combination...Your actions regarding this Opuss here, they filled me with elation. 😃
@TheCodsPollocks Why thankyou greatly...I've been trying lately...Your username is cool...And you are no fool.😃
@naaviie I showed my poems to someone in real life...I'll just say they have me a bit of strife...That owl is cute, just thought I'd say...And you have poetic talent, by the way.
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