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Perfect Imperfection

Six foot three of as close to perfect as it gets,
Red jeans, messy hair, eyes I'll never forget.
You lean in close,
Your voice a northern lilt,
And say "it'll all be reet,"
Or "you'll be ok."
Truth is, I'll never be ok again.
My heart will always be shattered from this hit and miss,
Of nearly being with you,
Of knowing your touch, your kiss.
And as you move on,
You can keep this splinter of my heart,
I hope it gets under your skin
And leaves a scar,
Like the one you've given me.
When you give your perfect imperfection,
To another girl who doesn't deserve it,
I'll smile like I'm ok,
Because I want you to find some joy,
Even at my own expense.
Just remember,
That's how much I love you.

This was my first ever Opuss!

Irrational_Kimmi

@Irrational_Kimmi

We're all mad here... All work is mine unless otherwise stated. ~ Instagram: @irrational_kimmi ~ Kik: irrational_kimmi #projecthumanity

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Comments & Feedback (18)

What a fantastic Opuss. The title is brilliant. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

Brilliant! You had me worried for a minute...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’

@sjw Me too!!! 😳 πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Been here...still kinda there 😞glad it's an old post 😌

Omg, definitely had me worried! Beautiful stuff 😳😘😘

@eddie12309 @sjw @MrsS @patdolan83 @minxyMolly thanks everyone, but don't worry! It's a six-month old poem, things have changed a lot since then. But I still loved him back then...πŸ’œ

Very good. My first ever opuss was my best it went downhill from there lol πŸ‘½βœŒ

You forgot to tag @taylergoatier

@sjw oh thank you for reminding me @sjw 😘

And very nice it is too hunnybunchβ„’πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

@leelee101 thank you lovely Lee 😘

Glad I saw it my sweet πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

How gorgeously sweet. What a ride. πŸ’šβœ¨πŸ’šβœ¨

@naaviie hehe thanks. It sure has been a ride, and still is!

@misslittleDHP πŸ˜˜πŸ’œ

Oh my god, can I just unlike this so I can like it again?? This is so good!!! I absolutely love it. My new fav!

This is a lovely entry! Well done!xxx

@Rawren @taylergoatier thanks so much πŸ’œ

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