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Joy Within

My life was waiting,
Time escaping,
Walls were closing in,

My light was wasting,
Mind complacent,
Fools were roving in.

My frights were pacing,
A mind so vacant,
Rules were opposed within.

The heights of raving,
Bind my craving,
But led my life to sin.
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My life's not waiting.

Times not escaping.

My walls aren't closing in.

My lights not wasted.

My minds filled with greatness.

Fools are running thin.

My frights aren't pacing.

My minds not vacant.

My rules are composed like hymns.

The heights of raving,

May have bind my craving,

But now I've found that joy within.

XSTABLISHX

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Comments & Feedback (43)

Great mate

@TheCodsPollocks Nice one, wasn't sure how it would come across.

@Stablish I like it :) just a little tip it's spelt 'wasted' Hun as opposed to 'waisted'' :)

@Cinders nice one, I still slip up with my spelling sometimes.(-:

@Stablish I love your poams!!!

@speed577 nice one mate (-;

;), love it fella !

@DaddyDooDahs Cheers mate, was experimenting a bit with this one.(-;

@Stablish ok now I'm not seeing your posts in my news feed. It's getting annoying now :-( anyways, glad your on the up mate. They say we have to love ourselves before others will love us.....or something like that, lol :-)

@Stablish nice :) I like it :) and I see you're back in the top 20 :D congrats mate :)

@smellyfingers Yeah I posted stuff and it didn't appear to display, sea monster asked for some error info earlier so I think there busy tying to sort stuff. It's been really busy as well plus people are learning how to repost . I've been busy reading other people's writing today, as usual I've got a stack of unfinished poems, might have to link them together in some cryptic fashion. I'm a lot happier now I might even have the confidence to start dating people again soon I haven't had a girlfriend for over two years now lol. Enjoy the rest of your night I will be off to bed shortly, extremely tired.😄

@ben_leggatt Cheers mate, i only posted a couple of poems. They were both from the heart though. Ps. Still haven't started your show yet, been falling behind in loads. Will try to catch up soon, looks like you have a good fan base building for it though.😊

@Stablish I know :D I'm actually amazed by people's reactions to all my opuss' :D i never thought I was any good :L lol

@Stablish good for you mate, women are a funny breed fella, lol. Yeah I'm shattered as well, too many late nights on this god damn app being chatted up by @aleishagayle20 isn't good for my health, Lmfao ;-)

@ben_leggatt I loved your first two. Im following at least 400 people lol. It's taking every spare minute trying to keep up. Living every minute of it though.😄

@smellyfingers LMFA at her poem earlier.😃 had me in creases. I'm going to take it easy with the word love. That's my lesson for today I think, don't underestimate the power of the word love. 😊

@smellyfingers Hey 😳 like you don't love it 😜 hehe aww shall I refrain myself from flattering you!? 😢 @Stablish lol glad you liked it and learned something new 😃!

@Stablish haha glad your smiling fella ;-)

@aleishagayle20 no don't stop!! Shake up me ego baby, shake, shake, shake my ego, hahaha ;-) xxx

@smellyfingers hehehe hahaha 😜 your way too cheeky 😘 okay guess I can forgive you this once for complaining about my whimsical ways 😘😘

@aleishagayle20 hahaha thanks. I accept your forgiveness. Lmfao xxx

@smellyfingers 😘 awwww good be no fun without you!

@Stablish hehe, well this app is certainly unique, which is probably why we have so many talented writer on it :) and I know what u mean about it taking every spare minute :) lol

I love the upbeat twist to it!

This is brilliant, I love the rhyme and message. Great poem!

@maisiebeth Thank you for reading, I get worried the ones further down don't get read anymore. I always write personal stuff luckily people can relate. Have a lovely night.😊

@Stablish you're welcome, you are great writer! Your writing is very relatable, I love it. :)

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@RichWithey Thanks mate that means a lot. I have always seen things from both sides. Yeah optimism seems to be doing the job😉 I'm glad you understand, I worry that people get the wrong impression, I try not to hold anything in from being written down, light or dark. Cheers for the comment😊

Thanks for the repost @glensaggs 😄

@Stablish Nice work 😉

@Stablish no worries mate I've been reading a quite a lot of other peoples stuff and if I like it, I'll repost it and all yours are good mate. I can't be bothered to write anything, I have to be in a certain mood 🚬

Very inspiring! Keep up this excellent work!😃😃😃😃😃

@glensaggs Know what you mean lol, Thanks for reading, and your kind words I appreciate it 😄

@michga Thank you, I will be playing catch up again as soon as I get off work at 10, thanks for the kind words😊

@Fly10 Thank you😄

Wow! brilliant!! ;)

Thanks for the repost @stolenhearts, I look forward to reading your new writing when I get off work😊

^-^> w00t w00t well done!!

@Stablish your welcome :D and i always look forward to your feedback hahaha! ☺😃😄😊❤

@Codenameverity Thank you😄

@Stablish that's awesome mate 👍

@TheViolator Thank you mate, appreciate it greatly.😊

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